I adored this story! Though I’m still pissed at rosalie! In my mind Bella waited until after she was changed and then gave her what for.

This story was absolutely lovely.

Awee poor Charlie! Why did this make my heart so sad?

I love this story so far it's well written and the word used to describe the scenes is great. I just finished chapter 10. However, my only problem so far is where is Emmett? I hope to see him later on in the story or I think ill be very upset, I know this story is years old at this point but this is my first time reading it.

This was beautiful, and I hope you know that you're an amazing writer. I'm pretty picky with the fics I read, and I couldn't put this down. I just really hate that a few awful people ruined your love for your story. As a fellow fic writer, I know how tough it is putting yourself out there, especially for less common ships like this one where there's a dearth of high-quality writing and a lot of people reading each fic. Whether you're writing fanfic on another site still, publishing original writing (I think you should!), or just taking care of your kids and trying to make it through the terrifying times we're living in right now, I hope everything's going well for you. Thank you for writing this wonderful story.

P.S. Thanks for teaching me the word copacetic! I'd never heard that word until now.

Ah, poor Bella. She’s got even worse luck for accidents in this than the original. Well, except for that near miss with Tyler’s van I guess!

So, we’re to assume she’s remembered the stories Jake told her many years ago, and put together cold skin, gold and black eyes (was black mentioned in the legend?) and Billy’s “superstition”?

I'm sorry for the heartache you went through whilst writing this, and I'm amazed you even carried on. Most people don't, after something like that. I hope things are a bit better? easier? now.
your story was wonderful, and I'm writing my review at twenty to six in the morning in the UK after having been awake all night reading. It was worth it. Happy Easter

ha that was cruel for those who don't know yet. you really should have a spoiler alert XD

I'm cackling. my degree actually was called BA Drawing

I did wonder.

OK there's a Dungeness in the UK, I've been there. I've not heard of Dungeness crab, is it a type of way the crab is prepared, or in there an American Dungeness? I swear, I know less and less about America the more I learn.

aw heck the feels

this was a lovely chapter. the effort put in was worth it

this is a very beautifully written story. I really like how organic the evolution of the relationship feels and how perfect they are for each other. It is a pleasure to read this story. Thank you for sharing.