Reviews for Entwined
Mrs.Cullen620913 chapter 28 . 6/21
I really hope you return to finish this is so good. Pls ignore all the mean comments the other reviewer JK was saying. There will always be people who will hate you are a good writer. REALLY looking forward for you to finish.
CapriSunnyD chapter 10 . 12/4/2019
How in the world did you make Bella even more pathetic than in canon? I'm having trouble believing it.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2018
Geez, this chapter was so fucking boring. His thoughts just went on and on and on and on. It was just...a rambling mess of who gives a fuck?
Fan199578 chapter 28 . 5/23/2017
Great story :) I know that last update was years ago but I'll hold out hope that a new one will come. I hope you are well.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/24/2017
I just finished chapter 15 and the angst is hurting me i feel like every paragraph im just screaming "KISS ALREADY!"
Ps. Your story is amazing and i love it angst and all i love rose and emmett. So good.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/8/2017
Love your story, thank you!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/21/2017
jk - if you hated the story so much, why carry on reading it? You're so fucking stupid, not the story. Anyway. I think that this story is coming along nicely. I just hate that they still don't see that the love they feel for eachother is reciprocated. I'm really enjoying this story. Very good. Thank you! Xxx
Guest chapter 12 . 2/21/2017
I just want them to KISS already. I mean, c'mon guys! It's not that hard. Just lean towards each other, pucker and as soon as there os contact... tada! You're kissing! Yay! I can't wait till they actually do have some sort of action. They belong together - its Edward and Bella for God sake! Love xx
corteznutterz1 chapter 23 . 8/18/2016
loved this chapter! thank you!
corteznutterz1 chapter 15 . 8/16/2016
This is one of my favourite chapters! I love the way how Edward was angry with bella and the conversation they had! I could actually picture it! Made my heart flutter HA!
corteznutterz1 chapter 9 . 8/16/2016
your story is amazing!
corteznutterz1 chapter 5 . 8/15/2016
amazing!
J.DRAST chapter 28 . 8/6/2016
Hello. Such a wonderful story! I have been enjoying it for a few days now. I really liked how intriguing it was and how towards the end all the pieces of the puzzle fell into place. Thank you so much for entertaining me. Suzan Noerr
Mansdas2 chapter 28 . 7/4/2016
Wow, just wow. You are very talented! I just loved how well you wrote the story. Amazing! Top favorites for sure! If there is more, please update soon!
jk chapter 21 . 4/4/2016
bellas fucking pathetic...why go and drink from the guy if your just gonna feel bad about to the point of being fucking comatose...bellas fucking stupid
1,206 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »