The whole time he was chasing bella he was with a shit ton of girls...how could bella want him? NO THANKS

So cute!

Cute little story! I wish there was more of a lemon, but the way you wrote it suited the characters. :)

Loved the story!

It was very much enjoyed.

I have questions/comments though:

-If B was a virgin and didn't really date and wasn't for random hook ups, how is it that she said she had felt a penis in between her legs before? It's when she's on E's lap.

-And 'It Started With Indecency', if your rewriting it, does that mean you'll take it down and repost all the chapters again? So we have to reread all of it? It was a great story before. And how will we know what to reread? Confused :S

-If B's saving herself for E and the way her feelings seem, I don't buy that she isn't in love with E already.

I hate it when Bella is the innocent virgin. It would totally suck to be helplessly in love with a jackass like that...but he was sexy as hell with the whole beat Mike's ass thing...although I hate that she is giving her first time up to a dick ward...he's adorable...great story!

Loved it!

Cute!

Great as always! Love it!

xoxo

jennie

Aw, I loved this, great job.

loved it thanks for sharing...

this was a great story! i hope you review soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

LOVED it:) Read this as part of the Haiti Compilation:) Very sexy and hot! Very well written:) I really enjoyed reading this:)

loved it!

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