I really liked this short story! It would definitely make an interesting AU, if Percy did team up with Luke, after all. You should correct the term "ελεύθερη" at the end. The grammatically correct term for the masculine plural is "ελεύθεροι" with an "-οι" as a suffix. Just saying. Good job!

Luck and Percy are so cute when there are fighting. I love how they decided to work together. that statue is amazing.

excellent. You should actually do a story about this with actual chapters and every thing. There aren't any good Luke/Percy friendship storys out there. Or at least i can't find any.

...Ahem.

I have a rather deep dislike for the movie, and Chris Columbus.

I could go one for hours of how they murdered the plot and characters but I will refrain. But if you read the book then think back to the movie you will see the difference within the first chapter.

Other than the movieverse thing, this is too short. One thousand words per chapter people. MINIMUM.

Also, where did the Lukacian thing come from? His name is simply Luke. Luke Castellan. Not Lukacian. It sounds cool though so not a big issue for me.

If I ignore the movie thing. Then the biggest problem is the length.

So all in all not bad.