| Reviews for Incommunicado |
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flamemeister23 chapter 29 . 2/12/2019 Toushiro is freaking iconic. |
Asilla chapter 35 . 2/9/2018 This was great. Thank you! |
drainednerves chapter 34 . 12/28/2017 Alright, I read this fic and it's prequel and I fricking love it! Your Danny is just a masterpiece, only a few authors are able to write him this good and in character! Be proud of yourself. I do have a few questions/remarks though: 1. Why is Aleksey's hair silver? Vlad's hair is because of the lab accident, right? Before that it was black. 2. How did everyone know, Taj waa headed to Equador? He arrived there at the same time as Vlad and Danny. 3. I'm a tiny little bit annoyed that Vlad called him "Danny" more often than "Daniel". I don't know whether that was intended (if it is, just ignore that) or on accident, but hey, do whatever you want 4. I. Want. More. Again, I'm totally in love with this story, espeacially Incommunicado. Keep it up! P.S. I also want an autograph from Toushiro |
PhantomBread chapter 34 . 12/2/2017 Holy crap. I’ve plowed through Powerless and Incommunicado in three days and I’m kind of sad that I didn’t take my time. Yet I couldn’t pace and stop myself from reading them because they were both so incredibly well-written, planned, executed, and suspenseful. I went through a lot as I followed Danny’s journeys with Vlad and as stupid as it sounds, in the span of three days I’ll never be the same again. I will never view these characters the same either, because you added so much more character to them than the show could ever hope to. I don’t know how on earth you kept track of the mind games between the two, that’s probably what I’m most impressed with. And I’m craving more, I just can’t get enough of your depictions of Danny and Vlad’s interactions. I actually cried as I read your author’s note for the last chapter. I know and see how much work and strenuous effort you put it. I feel bad for asking bc it’s so selfish but I’d just love to see you expand on what you’ve put here and make another sequel. Sometime in the future, where Danny eventually messes up his moral code and Vlad jumps back in game. I said it once but I’ll say it again, I just cannot get enough of the mind games and interactions! Seriously, amazing work though. You are absolutely incredible, in ways I can’f find the words to describe. Major kudos to you. |
Zagashi chapter 35 . 11/14/2017 ok i read both powerless and incommunicado and love the relationship between Danny and Vlad. your Storyline is awesome in both fics and the way you write is really confortable to read. I had to admit that I like to see Danny suffer and see him go through all the trials without giving up. In this fic It was even better because he finally won at the end. And also, I love all the side characters that you create in the stories, they have their own story and I just can leave them aside (except Aleksey, I never liked him dunno why). In another hand I was about to say that i missed Sam and Tucker since in this fic there weren't present, but seriously I didn't, all your OC made my day. I just hoped they hug Danny at the end, I think that will give peace to him, but really this was a good fic, I read it almost in one day, I just couldn't stop reading. |
no1ghoul chapter 34 . 9/28/2017 Love your stories! You have such a talent for writing - keep it up! :) |
android727 chapter 35 . 6/28/2017 Wow wow and wow! I read powerless and incommunicado in two days, back to back, and honestly, I am obsessed. As someone who has been reading fanfictions for 7 years, this is probably the best work I've come across. You have such a vivid control over your prose and your characters, and everything is so complex and fleshed out. I love how you didn't make Vlad too nice for the sake of plot, however, you acknowledged his humanity. I think Danny's character development has been evident, and there have been moments where I gasped when I saw this development. Toushiro and Diego were two favorites of mine, and I'm so glad you brought Toushiro back into this sequel. Your OC's were so well developed and meshed so well with the other characters. You've made Danny your own, and honestly I like this version of him even better than the canon. Complex, sarcastic, and a bit naive, you showed parts of Danny that people who have watched the show would never see. And don't get me started on the mind games between Vlad and Danny! They were so well fleshed and interesting, and read so real! thank you for this amazing piece of literature! i'll definitely be rereading it! all the best, reem |
MikaBlue chapter 34 . 2/14/2017 it's such a weird feeling this ending. it feel like everything that happened didn't, it was just a dream, kind of like one of those stories when the protagonist goes to another world for some great destiny, but once it's fulfilled and they go home they find out they've only been gone for, not even a millisecond of their life. |
Blackthorn Ashe chapter 34 . 10/1/2016 You guys have done it again! No words. Just no words. God bless you guys! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 Wait, why would he go anywhere with him at all? Last time, Danny was kidnapped, beaten, tortured, shot, blackmailed, and came within an inch of dying, all of it on a daily basis. No amount of embarrassment should be able to push him into going through that again. Why didn't he run away? For that matter, why did he agree to come at all? A fight with his mom would be worth it if nobody tortured him this summer, wouldn't it? Oh, and why the hell didn't he Wail the stupid mansion to pieces the moment his parents were out of earshot? Let Vlad deal with the fallout - he would have to make up a plausible lie anyway - and just blast it back to Amity? |
Litastic chapter 35 . 4/19/2016 I just have to say I absolutely love the way you portray Vlad and Danny's relationship. Your OCs are wonderful and add such a wonderful colour to your stories. The action is amazing and keeps me on the edge of my seat while reading and I'm so happy that I had a chance to experience that through your writings. Congrats on self-publishing! Wishing you all the best! |
godlet chapter 21 . 1/10/2016 I can just see this whole breakfast thing as Danny thinking 'god vlad just let me dissociate in peace!' |
godlet chapter 20 . 1/10/2016 Reading this series is like reading the Alex Rider novels except with a way more reckless, emotional, and ghostly protagonist. Rock on. |
Grace chapter 34 . 10/25/2015 Beautiful! I can't belive j found your second story! Sniff* I loved everything! The suspense and the drama the adventures and everything! Keep yo the great Job ️️ |
WeatherKitten chapter 35 . 9/6/2015 Such a Awesome, amazing, epic, fantastic story... I'm really sad that it's over! I can't sing enough praise for it! I love this Fanfic, Powerless, and the collector. You are my favourite fanfiction story writer. Nough said. |