Nice to see that this story is still going, even though the last update was two and a half year ago.

The only mistake I distinctly noticed was "Immortal, but not vulnerable." Assuming you wanted it as a reference to what he said chapters ago; it should be "...but not invulnerable".

I am quite liking the two characters points of view; with how different they seem in their own mind compared to how the other sees them. Are you planning on exploring Hephaestus' 'mortal' history and Aphrodite learning of such? One of the early chapters pointed to Hephaestus giving a monthly dividend to a family to keep a mysterious woman's grave maintained.

I'm interested to see how this 'happily ever after' as you've stated in a previous AN will unfold. Keep up the good work!

~CynicalEditor

Wow

Oooh

Bloom

Awesome xD

LOVING THIS! cheers

Please update!

I thought it was good keep up the good work

I like this so far :)

This is really good can't wait to see what happens next!

Interesting story. I wonder where it will go next

This is wonderful - the complexity and depth you've given the characters makes for such a compelling story (I swear my eyes were glued to the screen the entire time). It's also really interesting how you sometimes use more casual words and contractions, but your writing voice is actually quite... regal? At any rate, beautifully written, so please, please, please write more.

Nice symbolism with A and H vs. you. Hopefully you can get back to posting a little more regularly now.

This chapter's interesting, i can't wait to see where it's going

I eagerly hope for more!