... cmon dude. Kid Naruto would've reacted better than that. If you wanted him to fall into Riddicks hands do it in a way that actually makes sense. Maybe in the crash he got hurt and that's why he fainted. Maybe the barren planet is suppressing his chakra and making him weak. Anything would be better than collapsing in pure terror over something that still off in the distance and not an immediate threat. It doesn't make sense for the character.

Seriousky naruto just fainted? Oh boy ur pulling the classically annoying template 'strong till meets the romance'

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*sighs* For the love of Loki, Jack. Bad timing, *walks away shaking my head* Just...bad timing.

heh, Kakashi,eh?

I'm sorry. I didn't see the pairing you typed.

F $K! Why can't be with JACK?!

No offense. I just don't like gay pairings.

Please tell me Naruto isn't gay.

always confused me why they didn't leave the kids at the village, waiting in the ship..woulda kept 'e from dyin

anyways, great story so far _

This story is a bucket of fail. He was a f*cking ninja. Lived to see the end of his era, and many after that. And he faints? Faints?! He also fails to sense the guy move behind him, despite the story just earlier saying he has monstrous senses? You have ruined both Naruto and Riddick with this story

I like what I've read so far but I gotta mention it was 22 years and not 60. Sorry but that just really bugged me. Especially since I just binged watched all the movies this weekend.

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"Profit" Mohammed? I'd think he was a "Prophet".

*imaginary boner goes up*