I just discovered you and I really enjoyed the themes and writing of all of your FMA stories! I hope you find the time to write again, I would absolutely love to read more :)

Thank you so much for sharing!

Poor Ed. Love your writing!

Ha! Roy should know that Ed would know when it rains or not. His automail always begins to hurt when it's about to rain. I feel a bit sad for Ed, though. The pain from his automail and the rain must have brought up the memories of his and Al's failed human transmutation.

wow

Poor Ed... But wow, this is a great story! Funny, but with a much deeper meaning. Very original and well-written.

Props for doing it in such a short amount of time, too!

This is good, I like it. Will there be more? 'Cuz I think it'd be cool to read about Mustang confronting Ed.

poor ed maybe roy should listen to him more

I really liked it, just that I don't really understand why Ed was in pain. Still good though! Love it.

Hahah, cool! Though I can't help but feel a bit... how should I say this... triste? uhh... lonely? sad? I don't know much, but the ending of this story has a tinge of sadness in it. ... which makes it even better! Whoo!

I like this. It's very good.

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If I say it shortly.

I so love that.