i really don't know what a Mary sue is, but in my opinion i like her. if that's making any sense

anyways, i love this story, roxas is sooooo cute! i just love him 3

I hope you update soon!

This is very good as usual from one of my favorite author's. (Grins) Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm not usually a fans of OC pairings...wait, don't raise your gun just yet, this isn't a flame review. I think that overall that this is a pretty intresting read. If you update again, then expect another review from me. Til then, bye~

(-)/ *waves*