really love this update soon!

I have an account there {battlezone}, but it is too big, and I got lost and bored.

What do you find there that is so good? Maybe I am just not looking in the right place...

overall very good ... i love how your taking it slow and making it at least plausable (Arya and Eragon that is)... i love the way youve done it please update soon )

nice! this is definitely 1 of the better 1s iv read. just remember 2 make sure that u put spaces between words and that u italicize every thought. and thanks for putting a decent amount of thought into eragonxarya. and gratz with making shurican arya's dragon. all i have 2 say on the chareters is could u put aryas half sister into the story a little more?

Huh. This story is interesting. I enjoy the weirdness that is Eragon's powers. It's pretty cool. I am curious to find out how/when Shruikan and Arya bonded for the first time. And why in the world doesn't she remember. Keep up the good work!

Awww! That's so touching, (sniff) consider me the unofficial Beta for your story, (don't worry I do this for everyone who does allow anonimis reviews)

I really like your story, at first I thought I wouldn't like it cause it seemed a little Mary Sue-ish, (you know overly happy) but I am (for probably the 2nd time in my life... happy to be proved wrong)

Just to let you know, the only issues that your fanfic seems to have is grammatical and spelling errors.

P.S. I am glad I have left the Sparkle-pyres A.K.A Twilight behind, No seriously, I was one of the three guy Betas, and it was very boring over with all the Twi-hards.

I love that song... Break even is one of the top songs around right now:D

Here again, I love the growth between Arya and Shruikan {re-run}

The growth between Arya and Eragon is great too. You do it very tastefully. It might be nice to discover what each of them are thinking about the relationship. Maybe have one or the other chat with a friend {or brother.} Murtagh and Thorn have been out of the picture, perhaps one of them might do as a soundboard for Eragon. Or Arya might confide in Nasuada.

Anyways, another nice chapter :)

Aww, how cute! I think it was better that you combined the two chapters together, it makes the story flow nicely. Well done, renegade, I congratulate you on the awesomeness of your story. )

Great, can't wait for the next chapter.

Read this story from chapter 1 today, and loved it.

few spelling mistakes in the beginning that bothered me, but by chapter 24, your writing, was much better, i really do love this story, slightly improbable, but certainly not improbable.

the only thing i may wish for more of an explanation of is how Murtagh freed himself from the dark king, but besides that, awesome story, keep it up.

update soon! interesting twist, making all of the dragons side with the varden!

Gotta love Shruikan

A good slow chapter. I can't wait to see what happens though.

Oh! This is quite endearing. The giant Shruikan is like a hatchling, only a very old and experienced one. And still he is completely learning his new self at the same time.
I applaud your story.

Aww, how sweet. Shruikan's character in your story is absolutely wonderful. Most would make him an evil mindless dragon while you have given him emotions. And best of all is that you made him Arya's dragon. Normally, I wouldn't like this, but you have changed my opinion greatly. I hope you do continue this story soon. I don't think I could wait for very long. )