Jesus Christ too many song lyrics

BRUH SHE DON'T LIKE YOU

I don't know why am I reviewing this story again... honestly. I believe I just hate it enough so much, that my brain was like "You know what? Remember that one fic you read? Yeah, your first fic ever 7 years ago. FLAME IT!"
I don't have words to describe how disappointed I am knowing that this thing hasn't been deleted from FanFiction. Literally. I remember I stopped reading by the time Elmo appeared. It was just... No. The story would've been good if it had an actual and concrete plot where characters have an actual back story and they don't just pop up like crazy. Musical entertainment without a reason is just... boring. If they're going to sing, let it not be every 5 lines of dialogue. And save those musical moments for moments that actually matter. For example: A romantic picnic where Shadow is going to finally confess to Amy. That would be a good time to do it... moderately. Naruto and Sonic mashup is cool... but they are so, so, so, SO out of character that it doesn't feel like them. It's just... just know that readers will cringe. I did cringe, not once, not twice, not thrice... I cringed so much I even lost count. Your grammar. I'm not talking about that matter, there is a lot you need to learn. The dialogue. Starts in point A, jumps to point D and ends in point B. Get what I mean? There is little sense in what they say and do in the story. Like... one second Sakura is talking with Amy, and she suddenly (somehow) teleports, willingly, to where Sasuke is just to get "raped". The same happens with Amy, then the outcome is the same. They find each other, and get away from the boys that want to "rape" them. Oh, and I say "rape" cause the meaning of rape is to unwillingly have sex with someone else. In the case of this story, there is no rape. The girls like it, so it's not rape. Playing hard to get is not getting abducted by the guy who's in love with you every 5 minutes, and liking it. Playing hard to get is actually to push away the person who is in love with you. That means, no physical contact AT ALL. Not even talking to each other. Only the casual flirty look the girl would give the boy and vice versa until they finally end up together since the one of the parties is just playing hard to get. The randomness. Tone it down, seriously. Yes this was my first fic. I read this thinking it was going to be good. I was wrong. I honestly wanted to gouge my eyes out with a spoon. Now, I won't even rate this. There is no number in the world able to rank this story. Neither positive not negative numbers. To the ones who actually liked this story here's my advice: Stop. Get some help. Thanks for reading my opinion.
Sincerely: Aragorn Van Hellsing

Really... Michael Jackson?... just kidden I luv that boi ;) I'm just 15 so don't hate

WHAT EVEN IS THIS SHIT! YOU CALL THIS PLAYING HARD TO GET! YOU MAKE AMY LOOK LIKE A FUCKING WHORE! WTF THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING IS SERIOUS BULLSHIT AND THE DIOLOGUE IS LIKE CRAP!WTF DOES SASUKA LIKE HER RAPE! AND WHO THE FLIP IS THIS ROSELINA CHARACTER! ARE YOU 5!? I'VEEEN RECEPTION CHILDREN WITH BETTER SHIT THAN THIS! YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO TAKE ENGLISH CLAASES BEFORE YOU EVEN THINK THIS IS GOOD QUALITY ENOUGH TO BE SEEN MY MILLIONS!YOU DISGUST ME!

What even is this...

*Insert hurtful but honest comment/review here*

I LOVED YOU ALREADY WHEN I FINISHED READING THE AUTHORS NOTES!

I love it this was awesome i hope you make more and it was getting good the should have kids name dark and Maria . I'm a big fan of shadamy and also sonamy just hop you make more

How did Naruto get in this? By the way awesome song!

what the fuck just happened this is the best day ever(yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa)

Isnt this on deviantart.
Either way it is awesome

Thanks for putting in bad boy by cascada it is one of my favorite songs

That hurt dollface. Do i look like i had plastic surgery to y-oh wait you do, your face looks like sally's fake boobs. LOL AND I ALWAYS KNEW BIG BIRD WAS GAYYYYY HAAAA GAAAAAAYYYYYY LOL

*laughing my fuckin ass off!* at some parts where funny and O.O /./
P.s love it!