| Reviews for Break |
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  Maiko chapter 2 . 8/12 interesting |
 GrinningReader chapter 11 . 7/19 I love this! I love your characterization, the way the main cast interacts with Shiro, the way things don't convenient themselves for him but the plot still moves by his own efforts, and the way that although you have ocs to bring the story to life, they don't take over or act like cardboard stand ins. I'm really curious about the eavedropper, from Fred and George's POV it seems like onw of them was it, and yhe 'she' they mention could possibly mean Hermione since she was around when Nick asked for Shiro. The fact that Shiro noticed the flash of robes suggests it wasn't an invisibility cloak sinve the person could have just stood aside without being noticed then again they could have panicked and run causing them to be noticed. Aaah! So many possibilities! I really like your writing style! Can't wait to see how things turn out! Thank you for sharing this! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/24 It’s a shame this was never finished. I really am curious who the eavesdropper was after all |
| FinGirl14 chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 Please tell me you still continue this! This is so well written and it would be a shame if this is abandoned. |
| KaeterinaRomanov chapter 11 . 6/10/2017 please please please please update soon I'm dying to know what happens next! |
| Remi Rukh chapter 11 . 7/11/2016 You CAN'T stop there. I know you haven't updated in like two years, but that doesn't change the fact that I love this story! I really want to know who the eavesdropper is, and am very exited for when 'Dumbledore's Army' is formed. Just please, please, PLEASE update soon! This fanfic has way too much potential to just end there! |
| Vi-Violence chapter 11 . 7/10/2016 Very nice, any chance of more? |
| WaitingPerson chapter 11 . 5/8/2016 The story is really good and I love all the side characters like titus & co! I just hope you update the story again... |
| Fluffyfox05 chapter 11 . 4/9/2016 I know it's been a long time but this is SOOO Good! Please update! |
| Feysphorus chapter 11 . 11/7/2015 The eavesdroppers are Fred and Geroge...? |
| Erebus-Merula chapter 11 . 10/20/2015 Gah! It can't just end there! Noooo! I was desperately looking for the next chapter, alas, there was none. Please update this story. If you need help brainstorming feel free to PM me or use my email from my profile. :) Hoping, wishing and praying for more! |
| Kinaki747 chapter 11 . 10/18/2015 Wonder who Fred and George answer to. Hmmmm... O.o |
| Syl The tWins chapter 11 . 7/26/2015 Update |
| WanderingWatermelon chapter 11 . 6/29/2015 I actually contemplated the Eavesdropper being Umbridge before I realized that there was no way that the twins would listen to her under any circumstances. I think it might be... *5 minutes later* uhhhhhh... Jenny... I have no idea ;p Good work on this story, btw XD |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/21/2015 Please continue this story, I really like it |
