I was wondering when Yuki and Neal's line would come into his. Odd, considering Kel has probably been shipped with all of the great-grandparents (Neal, Yuki, Shinko, Roald). Tone and Darra? Hmm...

Hehe, I guessed right! I figured it was Tobe about halfway through. I loved the way you told several generations in such a short story.

I knew the old man was Tobe. Yahooo!

Aw! That was so cute!

Whenever you mention a chaacter I personally love, it made me happy. And when you mentioned Tobe marrying into Numair's family that made me happy.

Tobe's the new Myles. :-p

Sarah

Fantastic - I liked the fate you had for all of the characters, although i loved Tobe the best. And I thought, despite a brief appearance, all the children were very good characters. x

Omg I LOVED this! It's amazing! I loved that Tobe was the one that was telling the story in the end. I loved the whole thing. Greatness!

You once said you pop out oneshots like babies. Tonight, you just gave birth to octuplets. How do you feel?

:P

ALL as beautiful as the other. Well, other than the one with Faleron and Neal. And the one with Neal and Kel's "baggage". Because I agree with Neal that there are some things that shouldn't be discussed by/near him with/about Kel.

oh my gosh! i was almost crying during this, i loved it so much. it's so beautiful and sweet. the innocence of thayet really adds to the story too. i absolutely and without reserve, love your writing. its always so pure and brilliant.