Reviews for Daphne
D00rfr4m3 chapter 1 . 9/10/2019
I'm too lazy to login, sorry.

This was.. well written but extremely fucked up. In a.. positive way, I guess? I don't know, it's very impactful. It left me with questions- this Daphne is interesting, and I'd like to know more about her. On the other hand, knowing more would likely depress the hell out of me.

Lucius is messed up, so his characterization fits him pretty well, though it's definitely... extreme.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Quite the masterpiece.
WildBubblesRoam chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
I really enjoyed this. Your writing style is intriguing and pleasant to read without appearing too blunt. Generally, my favorite type of fanfic is dark smut works, but I've found that it's really hard to find good quality dark smut in comparison to some other types of stories. However, it seems you've definitely nailed it! Very beautifully done. Thank you for the lovely read and I hope to read more of your work soon.
Chupa chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Really intense. Dark and strange. It made me uncomfortable. I loved it. Never stop writing.
Smithback chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
good, interesting and quite odd...
Quantumphysica chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
That was really something else, and I liked it far more than I expected.
It was obscene, in a way. A good way. Disgusting and horrifying and incredibly hot. I don't often see stories like this on here, stories that play with the edge of what is acceptable. I think this is one of the few stories on here that really had me aroused from the very beginning. It's probably a tabooish thing to say but damn it; if you can write a story like this you deserve to know you're getting your readers wet ;)
wowza101azwow chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
This was hauntingly beautiful and sensual. Amazing job! I actually really enjoyed the pairing, and your writing is exquisite.
Jaimie chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I really loved this! Its so beautifully written, and gut wrenching. I love how dark and twisted it is. I'm in the process of writing a fan fiction/roleplay thats about Daphne / Draco. It too is very dark and melancholy. You have a tremendous talent my dear! Don't ever forget it!
MizSphinx chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This my first Daphne/Lucius fic ever.

And I LOVED it!

What's with you, woman? How is it that you can write such unusual pairings and make them so, so good? -sigh-

Anywho, this was a wonderfully morbid yet sexual piece. When Lucius first met Daphne at 8, then at 11, it reminded me of 'Lolita.' (and of course I'm sure you know about that story)

You kept him in character: an arrogant, debauching dominator. But that last scene showed that had he been given the chance, Daphne could have made him quite malleable. Heh. In any case, I'd thought the reason for her odd behaviour was because she'd been promised off to some guy and was trying to sneak a last chance in with Lucius, but...it seemed not to be the case. Poor thing.

Well done, as always! :)
My Leather Couch chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Fanfiction being what it is today (especially harry potter fanfiction), it seems to take more and more to pique, much less hold, my interest. But this story is magnificent; you handled your characters expertly, and your flow of words was enthralling. This was a delightful read, and I look forward to indulging in more of your work.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This story is completely beautiful and unlike anything else I've ever read.
Anna Scathach chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Beautiful. Certainly not on the conventional side of beautiful, but so wonderfully beautiful nonetheless.
cyberdag chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
If this was an experiment, all I can say is it was resoundingly successful.

This is an exceptional piece of writing.

This piece will stay with me for a long, long time, and has coloured my perception permanently. It has definitely left a lasting impression – the mark of success for a writer.

I could go on, but all I would be doing is repeating the other rave reviews, all of which I agree with wholeheartedly.

So very well done – thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this.
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
This is amazingly well-written, so vivid, so emotionless, yet so filled up with emotions..

I loved it :D
deleted2012 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Lucius is insane- mad, dark, dangerous, and insane.

This story is disturbing but I like it. Daphne scares me more than Lucius does though.

I would change the summary though- I had no idea what I was getting myself into.
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