| Reviews for The Twins Potter and the Chamber of Secrets |
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mysterious person101 chapter 11 . 9/17/2012 LOL, I love this! I am so happy you finally updated your story! :) Please update! |
ManyRainbows chapter 8 . 2/23/2012 eep! I hope you didn;t give up on this story! I just discovered it a few days ago and have been reading it, and it is one of the best "Harry Potter has a twin" stories I have ever read! please please PLEASE update? pretty please? |
devil4y chapter 8 . 1/16/2012 Your fic is so goooood! But sadly it looks like you are loosing interest in it and you MUSN'T do that! Think of all the fans watching and waiting for an update day and night...They'll go ballistic and hunt you down :D:D Kidding, but anyway really half a year is a long time and some are a bit nervous that you won't continue this incredible, unique and funny story..please prove 'em wrong.. :) |
Furionknight chapter 8 . 6/8/2011 I look forward to more :) |
Jet chapter 7 . 1/18/2011 Keep writing |
benperez31 chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 Oh that was a nice one. I like the way James Dean slammed Draco. I wonder what kind of a past James, Lily and Lockhart share? Were they together at Hogwarts? Who is the man with Lucius? Will Hagrid break up this fight like in the book? Update soon please. |
Mrmikezabini227 chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 ROTFFLMDATFO! rolling on the fucking floor laughing my damn ass the fuck off |
november21 chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 Well, that dissolved into chaos quickly. Nice chapter. |
Furionknight chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 I look forward to more :) |
Kumiko Seph chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 cool chapter |
ShadowBroker chapter 6 . 12/21/2010 Nice chapter i Hope you update soon. Im happy don't take this in a bad way but im happy this is a Male oc story. Update soon mate! |
ToshimiOkami chapter 6 . 11/20/2010 can't wait for more Mere ;P |
livin and breathin chapter 6 . 7/31/2010 Okkk so I have officially read all of the tics concerning the twins potter and am very happy with that fact bc it's taken way too much time up as is ;-) I'm just kidding.. I really like this story just bc it has so much amazing potential to be great and there are just so many directions it could be taken. Even I've got to admit that the plot was a bit rocky in the philosphers stone but I think you're beginning to make it up here. I think the main reason that I wasn't turned off from the story was the way you wrote it. You really are an excellent writer but there seemed to be lengths that weren't taken which would have madntgis story just a bit more.. captivating. I do have faith though that you'll be able to pick it up bcause that's what I've been seeing from this fic. There's some definite growth being shown in the plot line so kudos to you on that and the effort I'm sure you've put into it. If I have any criticism it's that I kind of want to see the various different outlooks in the fic because there are just so many new characters here that are rather unknown. I'd really like to understand what's going on in travis' and brian's minds because although they're the main characters we really haven't gotten to know them all that well. I'd also like to understand what's been going on in this Harrys mind because due to his different upbringing he's bound to be rather different and those are things I think need to be brought to a forefront as well. Clare Stovoids reaction to what happened at the end of philosophers stone was never made quite clear either.. We saw her become close with James at the end but the thought process that led her to allow herself to take that step in the relationship was never shown. Also with tge Weasleys- what made them really expect something was really wrong? In tge original story it made sense that they were worried because they understood that harry came from a terrible home but what made them so worried here for their personal safety when the four of them were being brought up in a pretty loving home. Maybe a conversation held between the Weasley boys would have voiced their suspicions and accentuated the different types of relationships between them and the four brothers. Obviously both I and the other readers understood the steps and made the connections ourselves as to why you did this and that but in order to take the story into the next level you need to put in those subtleties and I hope that gives you an idea of what I'm talking about but honestly despite that you're doing a great job progressing the story and still keeping it interesting. I'm really looking forward to what else you're going to do with the story. Can't wait to hear more from you Livin and breathin 3 |
Furionknight chapter 6 . 7/21/2010 I look forward to more :) |
Buzzing Spontaneity chapter 6 . 7/21/2010 I want to know how the hell I missed the alert for chapter five. This is one awesome story. By the way, I know the noob who quit on you, because she just so happens to be one of my best friends, so I'll thrash her at tennis as a punishment for you :P I really enjoy this story. I have to say, I never expected to find Harry quite so quiet with his family, but he is abominably hard to get right as he is, let alone as someone different but exactly the same. If that made any sense. Plus, James Dean sounds like a Ravendor, as opposed to Ravenclaw. But hey, he is more Ravenclaw deep down, I think :) I do think it's still easy to understand where they are coming from though, and you did a great job stopping them being... Um... Male Mary-Sues... Okay, I /think/ those are Gary-Stus... Hmm. Well, basically, none of your characters are difficult to believe or too similar to each other, so it's a bit like I actually know them as real people now, who I actually have conversations with :P I'm really curious about this plot now. I want to know what happens. So great job, and update soon please :) PS: I actually revere your music taste. Metal rules. End of discusion. :) |