Pls! More!

Yeah I don't see a point in reading a story when in the first chapter it shows the main character dying. Basically all this shows that at the end of this story all that happens is he dies and that completely ruins your story for me.

Oh I play Mass Effect 3 and Mass Effect 2 and trust me on this one don't let a friend transfer your games from a flash drive to your Hard drive to your 360 sure your achievements are still, but you have to start all over. Man I hate it when that happens. Anyway love the book I did see some grammar mistakes in some of your chapters. Here's some advice if you want it. Whenever I write I stop what I was doing and fixed it or could use Spell Check and have it spell check audio manically.

Your work is excellent and very good grammar I'm doing a Fan Fiction of Mass Effect and I could use some input on it.

Unique idea. "Ascended human." I like it.

Great story, looking forward to seeing how it continues.

This is an awsome story, and the first SI I've actually liked, keep upthe good work and may your updates be frequent.

Why did you name this fic "Shadow Phoenix?"

I mean, if you have a good reason I'll drop it...but reading the first few chapters, I haven't got a reason. It makes me think you chose it because you thought it had a nice ring to it, or sounded cool, which leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

In relation to the actual fanfic - it's decent, I suppose. Some annoying grammatical errors occasionally, and I don't understand why they'd accept him (of all people) aboard the ship, but like I said - only finished the first three chapters, so I'll read a few more before I make up my mind.

OI! Where u go bro? I want an updatr

Great story! I love it!

bloody damn..i have no words for how amazing this fic is. i eagerly await future updates and alenko is an incredibly interesting twist on this.

you definitley deserve more reviews.

keep us posted friend :)

good chapter, cant wait for more.

interesting fic.

Not bad, not bad at all.

Unusuall to see an ME SI that is set after ME2, most fics are set before either game.

Will there ever be more chapters in this fic?

Wow, I really like your story. I'm normally skeptical towards most ME self-inserts, but this one had me nailed. And about bloody time the Council started acting...

Keep up the goog work!