| Reviews for Safe by being his Daughter |
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coolgirl111 chapter 1 . 5/30 Why did you stop this is way entertaining you are doing great |
TheBlueMoonRose chapter 8 . 4/3 Saphira Slytherin? God i hate it when writers like you change harry potter's name even if he turns into a girl... that girl name is just horrid you could have named her a girl version of Harry There's so many like Halle (English) Hallie (English) Hani (Australian) Hariala (Hawaiian) Hariata (Hawaiian) Harrieta (English) Harriet (English) Harriët (Dutch) Harriett (English) Harrietta (English) Harriette (English) Harriot (English) Harriott (English) Hat (English) Hatsy (English) Hatt (English/Scots) Hatti (English) Hattie (English) Hatty (English) Hazza (English) Heike (Dutch, Frisian, German) Heinrike (German) Heintje (Dutch) Hendrika (Dutch) Hendrikje (Dutch) Henka (Polish) Henna (Finnish) Hennie (Dutch, English) Henny (Dutch, English) Henrieta (Polish) Henrietta (English, Hungarian) Henriette (Danish, Dutch, French, German, Norwegian) Henriikka (Finnish) Henrika (Swedish) Henrike (German, Scandinavian) Henriqueta (Portuguese) Henryka (Polish) Hera (after the greek goddess) Heradena (Unknown) Hetta (English) Hetti (English) Hettie (English) Hetty (English) I personal love Hera or Heradena |
louisejtwin2 chapter 15 . 4/1 You have to update! |
rowenasheir chapter 15 . 12/17/2019 So she started her menstrual cycle. NM not doing her job if she hasn't told her about it. can't LV get Blaise mother to mentor Saphira? |
llLittle Sll chapter 15 . 11/6/2019 OMG HARRY/SAPHIRA JUST GOT HER PERIOD! XDDD Can't wait to see how she will deal with that, and how everyone reacted to her scream xD |
Ailuj0 chapter 15 . 8/18/2019 Hey, this story is awesome! It is so special in the way it is focused on the difficulties, but also on the possibilities that goes along with the transformation of harry in saphira! Please continue with your writing, it would be a shame if you abort this fanfiction! (Sorry for mistakes I am much better in reading englisch as in writing, because I had this language only for a few years in school) Greetings from Germany :) |
Munkijscat chapter 15 . 4/24/2019 Love the story. Please update more. |
ZaNaLu chapter 10 . 2/3/2019 Hum |
LadySandy chapter 15 . 10/28/2018 Can’t wait to see more. You left the story at a edge or your seat cliff hanger. Hope all is well with you |
Loki Rogers chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 continue pleaseeeeee |
Love2read23 chapter 15 . 7/11/2018 I am unsure if I like Bellatrix knoing about the source of the maternal half of Saphira's blood. In a sense, her crazed behavior is now spent in defense of Saphira but in another she is deranged and should not be allowed near Saphira regardless. I like the story. I wish there was more of Saphira standing up for herself after all of Lady Malfoy's needless torture. I am so happy to hear Draco is out for the suitor count. I don't know if it's a possibility but Severus is now a pureblood and while as old as her birth parents it's not an un heard of arrangement in older times which the wizarding world tends to take after. I was partially confused as to why the Carrow twins were not an option for Draco if they're really less than five years younger than him. I assume that the blood was just Saphira's first period though her symptoms would have made it obvious had cramps been included in them. It really did just sound like a cold. I so wish that you had continued because I would dearly have loved to read about her father (the Dark Lord!) and Severus (the evil bat of the dungeons) had run in expecting some attacker to see Saphira naked and menstruating. Ever single father's nightmare. How Narcissa has neglected that very needful information is abominable. In terms of corrective criticism I want to point out that there are several consistent word errors either spelling or simple mistakes such as safe instead of save and she or he being interchanged. The time jumps between the chapters is confusing as some jump forward several months and then the next is back to two weeks after the change, at least I think she was introduced after two weeks. Also, every time it refers to the Dark Lord in Hogwarts or the marriage contract between Abraxas and the Dark Lord (calling him Voldemort doesn't seem to fit this more caring father but Dark Lord seems too formal now. What should we call him?) it says twenty years ago which if you were moving the timeline up that's cool but that just doesn't seem possible as the Potters were at Hogwarts then and that was only a few years before Harry was born. I don't know maybe it works but the Dark Lord just seems like he should be older than 40 years old like Severus. Because really even Malfoy would be older than him then so how could he have been in school with Malfoy's father, Abraxas, if those were the years Malfoy was in school? I like Slytherin Manor and I like the Dark Lord. I just hope for more Daddy Daughter bonding time. Thanks for writing. May you be inspired to (and may real life allow you to) continue. |
Love2read23 chapter 14 . 7/11/2018 I am so happy for Saphira to finally not subject herself to Lady Malfoy. Narcissa is out of line and I hope the Dark Lord addresses that soon. I love the way that the Dark Lord is thinking and I hope that Saphira and him have a heart to heart soon as it will bring them not only on the same page but closer together as well as alleviating Saphira's fears. Really this all has gone on long enough. I am so happy that the Dark Lord doesn't consider Draco a candidate. I would love to see the Malfoy's put in their place. They are definitely getting two uppity. I don't see why Severus was to fault for Saphira choosing to be a female. The Malfoys could not have known he suggested it and really he shouldn't have needed to comfort they upset. |
StarFlameSky chapter 15 . 6/16/2018 When are you updating? Pleas hurry ! |
purrfus chapter 15 . 6/12/2018 Fascinating. |
MadeIn93 chapter 15 . 4/17/2018 Great story,Can’t wait for the chapters that I hope you are going to write |