| Reviews for To Speak it Aloud |
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sampam69 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015 That was really good, thanks for sharing :) :) :) |
caleab.covert chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 Very nice. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2014 That was so cute. Good work |
hippysheep chapter 1 . 7/21/2012 arg!sooooo good ) i have faith, i believe! beautiful story thank you! |
Skyz5034 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012 interesting story with a few minor grammatical errors thanks for posting |
BlackBeautyQueen33 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011 That was wonderful |
make-x-applesauce chapter 1 . 9/10/2011 I've never read a sex scene like that before... It was so refreshingly different. The whole thing was just amazing. |
krissyduck09 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 Your story would have been great, but there were a few issues I had with it. First, the format that the story was written in was kind of weird; and the way you set up the dialogue made it kind of confusing because I didn't really realize who was actually talking until I reread the sentences a couple times. The only other problem I could actually see, and this is just my opinion, was that the dialogue was kinda choppy and there were a couple spelling errors, but nothing too bad. Other than that, your story was good. |
chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011 Aww. So cute, so hot! Hmpt, didn't like that Ronnie right from the start! Cunning little... Ugh -_- Lol Well, anyway, very nice! |
Addiena-Saffir chapter 1 . 12/12/2010 wow that was pure amazement. loved it. |
twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 Loved it amazing so sweet |
China Dolly chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Loved it. That was a bit sad, romantic, sweet, hot and very, very sexy. ) Love, China Dolly |
Rayne McKenna chapter 1 . 9/23/2010 One of the best I've read. And I've read a lot! |
Writing Keeper chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 Nice story. I actually hated when Ronnie started to hit on Morgan. I was like "THAT FUCKIN BITCH! I'LL KILL HER!" XD |
PinkHimeLacus chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 SEXY HOT! Thanks for sharing. More please! |