freakin adorable! I love it sooo much!

nice! :) funny idea

I couldn't help it, but I read this super fast like it was Luffy's brain on fire talking and it fit so perfectly~! SO Cute~!

If I'm ever at loss for synonyms, I'll be sure to check this out.

cute, really cute

Puppy Luffy! I think I'd go insane if there was one. But super cute story and the run on sentences MADE the story. Without them it wouldn't of worked as well, after all I see Luffy's thought process as one long run on thought.

I think I just died. Wow. I so enjoyed reading this. I think all puppies think like this... I want a puppy Luffy!

Aw, so cute. I love Puppy!Luffy and the fact that he loved Zoro so much. I got mad that Sanji kicked Luffy but then Zoro saved him so everything was okay. Again, this story is so cute!

so adorable! I love how he sounds all ADD all the time. 3 Very cute

Oh my goodness..I read this whole thing and loved it! I usually don't like second person and would never be able to write it...period...but you made it work, awesome work my friend. Hehe, I wonder indeed why normal and puppy Luffy's mindsets are so alike...there's irony in there somewhere i know ahaha!

Ohmigod darlin that was friggen AWESOME! Twas totally cute and absolutely adorable. I swear i've read it like three times already. Very creative hun.

-R.G.W

I loved it. So great! i thought the interesting point of view was VERY creative and very funny. I'd almost call it IC for Luffy's thought process! Kyaha! Your Page Breaks also made me laugh!

Cute little one-shot glad I found it!

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I really liked your story. puppy!luffy and the real one really are just a like.

Naw it was adorable. There needs to be more puppyLuffy in this world. Thanks for the story

So very, very cute! I loved the narrative style. So /excited/ and /happy/ and I think it's exactly how a puppy would think if he could, especially a puppy Luffy. And the way he adored the hell out of Zoro was precious :D