Oh gods, it's so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! :DDDD A new favorite for my collection! :3

FAN!

This was hilarious and just plain awesome!

awww this was super cute! it literally made me go 'awwww' i love it!

F.

AkuRoku and Seiner in one.

I LOVE.

I actually got into Seiner through a cracktastic chat play. xD It was wonderful.

Anyway. I love this. 8D

I feared you were gonna carry through with the wedding and the story was going to be about how Hayner would come to regret not saying no - not that I would have had a problem with that, it's just it would've been kinda sad, especially if Rox had genuinely loved him - but I'm glad it was resolved in the end, definitely voting for the cute.

Best line in this story: 'but the ring on his finger echoed the word 'forever' and he worried if he had enough love left to spare Roxas that long.' That one line, geez, it was just, I don't even know how to describe it but somehow it encompasses so much in it. I guess it's the one that kinda hits home how much of a mistake he's making and, even worse, how much he knows it.

One thing I did think was quite strange (as in different, not as in that's just freaky) was when you said 'Whatever problems Axel had with Roxas were forgiven'. I guess it's just because, it's usually Axel that's cocked up and Roxas who's got the issues. I don't know if that was deliberate or not but I just thought it was a nice change (although when you read later on about the whole not ready to be married thing I guess it maybe makes sense that Axel had a problem with it)

And the little italics bit: Olette was never any good at whispering but you're not told what she said til much later on but regardless you know that she's made a point even if you're left out of the loop and you know that everyone else has heard the truth too.

And Seifer's number thirteen with the three for them and then being only left with one - himself. Just, d'aw, if you didn't know he'd probably thump you you'd wanna give him a hug. Or at least a hankie.

I actually think you could've carried on along the lines of 'making a huge mistake' and it would've fitted and flowed really well, you wrote the beginning mix and mash of everything going on in Hayner's head extremely well. And don't get me wrong, I liked the ending, it was really cute! But I feel that the way you started off and then ended don't exactly meet quite right, like, maybe don't flow into each other quite as well as it would've if you'd maybe written a different take on the ending. I don't know why I'm complaining because I definitely prefer cute but I guess as a reviewer I should let you know.

And now seeing as I've over-analysed this to Hell and rambled on more than I've ever done in a review (I apologise, I don't know what's wrong with me) I'll just say thanks for updating and that I genuinely did enjoy the fic any minor complaints aside. Thanks, Kess x

*applause* Great job! Well done!

Really cute fic! X3

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So, so lovely. Utterly heartwarming. I love love love how Seifer just goes 'me' and slips his arms around Hayner; it's so... 'simple and clean', to use a phrase XD - no messy 'er... you don't know him's and 'er... it's... *blush* Seifer' etc. 8D8D8D I love this very much! And the idea of Axel having worn the ring on a necklace that whole time is... so sweet.

D'aww, impromptu double weddings are fun. :) I liked this! Tanks fer the read.

ohmai.

xDD

I would've said no

It all ended well :D