….interesting twist at the end.

That was one heck of a twist at the end there. I do sort of like that Shunsui's question goes unanswered. There is a chance that the answer is one of those (Jyuushiro is trying to convince himself, or that he truly does think Ichigo will be happier there). There is also a slim chance that they are both true.

Anyway, great story.

I love this ending XD

I loooove this ! And I totally agree with you, I really could imagine Ichigo softening up when he's a little drunk. I like it when Ichigos softer side ist presented, so this ff was really pleasing to me 3 keep on writing, I'll be sure to check out your other works !
Syriex

I love it I love a ichigoxukitake story

Jyuushiro sounds a little creepy in this story. Or maybe that's because i listen to creepy music... Who knows

I seriously couldn't stop laughing at your note. You made it sound like the ending was a rapist having its way with someone or you lol

Well.. shit. I'm speechless here...should I even feel sympathy for Ichigo at this point?

OoO smooooth Ukitake and cheeky. o wohooooo

I kinda want to see a sequel where Ichigo finds out that little tidbit and how he deals with his hollow in Soul Society
And how Ukitake deals with that mess

I want more of this story! Dont keep it a oneshot please!

You should make another Ukitake x Ichigo. I love them paired together and this one was sooooooo cute

I think the ending's okay!

Wow, I really loved your story. Liked Ukitake's manipulative side at the end :)

I've also read the stories from the Uke Ichigo collection. Those were truly amazing. I must say you've made me a fan of Kenpachigo (love the name btw) en nnoiIchi. Hadn't really expected that to happen :)Starrk with Ichigo is a definite favorite as only ones I didn't read were the ones with Chad and Ganju. Couldn't bring myself to :).

I like your writing style, including the first person POV (which I usually dislike). I think it's amazing how you're able to create and conclude some many different plots... I always get stuck at the beginning of my attempts :) And even though I've read so many of the stories (and the sex scenes by now *blush*, I didn't really notice any repetitive story lines or actions. Which I have to admit is something I hadn't expected.

I can't think of any constructive criticism (I really suck at that), so I'll just stick to the praise :)
Hope to read more of your stories soon :)

I liked it, there should be another chapter if you ever think on it.