Yeah, Tony would be arrogent enough to measure his armors' power in 'Stark units'. That was a great author addition that fit right in with his character. Likewise, I was pleased to see the rollar skates make another appearence. The action was tightly written and well done. I thought you did a splendid job bringing Iron Venom to life, especially with the descriptions. And I liked how Pepper was necessary to bring things to an end. I look forward to reading more of your Iron Man works.

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that was so awesome!

it was great, i mean seriously brilliant!

and thank for mentioning me!

Aw! This was an awesome story that I'm sad to see end:( The plot twists and everything was awesome! Please write again!

Venom, eh? I wasn't expecting that. Still, I am enjoying this story a lot. You really seem to have the characters' 'voices' down. I liked the debate/banter between Rhodey and Pepper about aliens. Please continue soon!

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DUN DUN DUN...hehe:) This chapter was AWESOME! Pleasepleaseplease update soon!

nice! update

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really good but i think tony would have known about the virus thingy hanging onto him

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Well isn't this story a breath of fresh air. The cartoon is action-adventure and so a story along those lines is much appreciated. I hope you chose to continue. The main characters seem in-character and the plot is good so far. I look forward to seeing where you're going with this.

yeah i liked this! lots of action! :P :)

great story so far please keep on writing!

looks like it's going to be good

Wow! This is an excellent start! I think eveyone was well in charector and I like the plot:) Please update part 2 soon!