you have the story marked as a Female Shepard/Tali story, thought I would point that out. Nice writing style though.

Great ending to a great story. Keep up the good work!

Very well done, for some reason when i saw your avatar my brain translated bit at the bottom into slerion.

This was a good chapter. I am suprised to see the quarians weren't thrilled to hear they could return to the homeworld but a bit of resistance is always good for a fic.

Ah another semi- cliff hanger! It keeps the next chapter interesting though I guess.

Very beautiful man, very beautiful. I hope you finish this story soon! I can't wait to see it's conclusion.

Intersting concept you've got going on here.

One thing though, a number of chapters are of Shepard and Tali waking up together, and somethimes they can share a close resemblence with each other. Just be careful that they don't read the same.

nice work.

Ah classic EDI. Sometimes she is overdone in her character but you have her speech wired down well. Nice work.

Short and sweet. Well done.

Quite a few little errors like words missing here and there but overall another great chapter.

I'm liking the talk he had with Legion. :D

Yay Tali's alive! Good enough for me.

Interesting to see what will happen and I look forward to reading more!

That's awesome. More please.

Nice to se chapter 14 is fixed, it now makes perfect sense, well done by the way too.