Reviews for Cloudier Sky
Guest chapter 14 . 5/11
Hee hee hee hee
Maria Elena chapter 16 . 5/2
Ya no hay mas?

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Books4Life16 chapter 16 . 3/22
This story is amazing! You’ve done a great job with the storyline and characters making the story highly interesting. Well done! I hope to see more :)
Mamy 83 chapter 16 . 11/26/2019
Pourquoi les meilleures histoires ne sont jamais terminées ? C'est assez frustrant ! Manque de temps, d'inspiration...
foxymama31.1987 chapter 15 . 10/12/2019
pish! like snivelius would get the upper hand of THE DARK LORD now that's a laugh! Love the story btw it's awesome sauce!
emilyalarcon595 chapter 16 . 8/17/2019
I like to expect you to update your story soon.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/4/2019
Any reason why Lucious doesn't simply tell Voldemort who the Light Mate is? He sure as hell knows as Harry told him and with his inaction he is endangering not only his son, his family and himself but also the Dark sect itself. I can't imagine Voldy to be very happy about this... And it doesn't really make sense
FotoDi chapter 16 . 6/10/2019
This is an interesting plot.
Will you continue?
Ideas:
1) Wouldn’t Fudge/Umbridge try to intervene by jailing the “dangerous creature” in Azkaban?
2) How do the Goblins view Water Nymphs? Do they revere such rare powerful Creatures, like Weres?
3) Silas is the Sole Heir to the wealthy houses of Potter, Black, and Baltimore ... maybe more. As Harry’s dominant Mate, Does Marvolo benefit
from this political windfall? Could the Dark Lord legally stage a Coup in the Wizengamot and win a bloodless Revolution
4) Harry has to react to Wormtail...
5) Would Blackmarketeers try to drug and kidnap the young Water Nymph to sell before Harry and Marvolo have an established bond?
6) Unharvested priceless Basilisk corpse ... potentially rotting in the Chamber of Secrets, was the Basilisk someone’s Familiar?
amg.supernatural chapter 16 . 3/13/2019
Awesome read
alexiamrogers chapter 16 . 2/19/2019
hope u update this
mumphie chapter 16 . 12/11/2018
ch.16 - wow, another well written story that will never be completed. Sad. Real life must have blindsided you. Either that or your muse bought a ticket for across the world.
mumphie chapter 2 . 12/11/2018
ch.2 - Harry should have paused when he realized that Dumbles KNEW that Sirius was innocent and did nothing.
Nargelz chapter 16 . 12/6/2018
Plz continue
Nargelz chapter 2 . 12/5/2018
So how is tom gonna be Harry’s he is a half blood
WereBunny87 chapter 16 . 7/11/2018
Need... more I love this so much I had to read it again!
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