Reviews for Why
angelamorales514 chapter 5 . 5/8/2012
this definitely needs to be continued :)
Skate-815 chapter 5 . 4/20/2010
I really liked the line about Twitter being an elusive bird that Walter's trying to catch lol. I could totally see him not getting the concept.

And I of course loved the ice cream scene. I don't think it's something that would necessarily happen on the show but it really worked here. I also liked her little gestues like her kissing his cheek. It just reminds us that they were having their first kiss a few hours ago, and instead of having a chance to figure it all out, they have to focus on Walter.

update soon
Icecat 0010 chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
Yay another chapter! Can't wait for more!
madmerica chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Pah, I knew peter wouldn't hug but I had to try, right?

I like where you're taking this. Need to read on.
Lixie87 chapter 4 . 3/21/2010
AH! awesome chapter! :D
Skate-815 chapter 4 . 3/21/2010
Wow, I didn't see this coming. I'm a bit confused as to how this happened between chapters 3 and 4, but in a good way.

I can't wait to see what else you have coming up in this fic!
Elena Grant chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Great one! Oh my God, I can't wait to read more!
Icecat 0010 chapter 3 . 3/9/2010
Well, you certainly have me on the edge of my seat! I look forward for more! Thanks for sharing your story!
Inkblood chapter 3 . 3/8/2010
WHATWAITWHOHOWWHENHUH?

Where did he go? And why the flipperdoodle did he have to inteerupt such a tense moment?

WRITE QUICKLY FOR ALL OUR SAKES!

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Time passes. Even when it seems impossible. Even when each tick of the second hand aches like a pulse behind a bruise. It passes unevenly, in strange lurches and dragging lulls but pass it does. Even during 8 week hiatuses.
Inkblood chapter 2 . 3/8/2010
"The same thing I do every night Pinky, try to take over the world."

Oh, me too, when I'm not studying my tail off and planning...things.

Very your writing.

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Time passes. Even when it seems impossible. Even when each tick of the second hand aches like a pulse behind a bruise. It passes unevenly, in strange lurches and dragging lulls but pass it does. Even during 8 week hiatuses.
afjordable chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
hug?

It's a very good start, and prettyunique considering all the Jacksonville stories. ;) I want to read more.
ab89us chapter 3 . 3/8/2010
O_O! OMG I LOVE THIS! I usually don't read unfinished fics but this is too great not to read right now!
Lixie87 chapter 3 . 3/8/2010
AH! love this! :) looking forward to the next updatee :D
katiemay017 chapter 2 . 2/28/2010
this story is Great so far! please continue :)

thanks
Inkblood chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
You lied. Peter didn't hug me. In fact, he didn;'t show up at all!

Very well written, though; can't wait to read the next chapter

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Time passes. Even when it seems impossible. Even when each tick of the second hand aches like a pulse behind a bruise. It passes unevenly, in strange lurches and dragging lulls but pass it does. Even during 8 week hiatuses.
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