Chapter 11 is most funny))

I'm bored with your naruto so no longer reading. Pls change name of your protagonist from naruto to something else because he is more of an oc than anything else. Besides there being Gaara, the only thing naruto does which is canon is using clones. The rest of his abilities are from other random animes. I understand this is a xcover with many different crossovers, but your naruto is way more a oc then anything. Plus his emotional range up to this point of the fic has been happy go lucky pervert. Literally, your killing your character by not showing any other emotions.

I I guess it's safe to say that you're never coming. No big deal though , we all have lives to live

Amusing shield

wait...so Kisame knows Itachi is/was in contact with Jiraya?

good story bro!

have to admit, was expecting yachiru to randomly shown up for a smooch.

Well I decided to read this and I found it to be an absolute pleasure. I hope you begin the rewrite soon I'll be looking forward to it.

Awesome! Love it!

I thought it was Tuxedo Mask

Great first chapter

Cool stuff bro. Continue on!

A year. A YEAR has passed since you last updated... Some kind of relief would be nice!

actually there is a card game named magic that was made around the time of yugioh but im not sure if its the same due to yugiohs decline lately they have started making more magic cards and its become quite popular

its garra or shukaku and i love your oc kirais quirk of maybe is hilarious

very very confident opening chapters. Free flowing naruto that fits into the plot without feeling like some over rated oc that somehow knows all the answers and makes the interaction stilted. Good job. Even the flirting is bearable and subtle, others make it feel so amateurish.