Really great start. If I may suggest, give a tiny bit more detail on why he's leaving (I'm not feeling the danger) and I think that could be a great addition. But, keep going your doing better than I ever could and I definitely enjoy your idea. The concept is always what matters in writting and your's is solid.

Keep writing :)

Aw, this was so sweet! I loved reading it so much! I read all of these until 12 am! It was awesome! Great job! :D

love it update soon cant wait to read more

Very sweet! My fave was his words to Angela. Good job!

I like it. I've always been a sucker for airport reunions

Meh, not bad. Better than mine, not bad.