Reviews for Crush
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
i love these two, and love them more as a couple write more of them please?
brethitman2 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
hey i this story read one where they run away and get marry i love too see that
LadyGrelka chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
So that was the first fic that had Bret paired with someone in it and I must say I liked it. I can really see Bret saying things like that and acting that way (well maybe not the slash but I woman can wish)
LLevey chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Great!

Liz :D
Hailey Ambrose-Moxley chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
okay, love this story. you guys have got me reading slash now. awesome job and a great pair. never even saw it! awesome job.
Thorsmaven chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
...oh my XD That was very hot! I wanted to write this pairing too and I was curious to see if anyone else wrote anything and boy am I ever in love!

Excellent story!
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I liked this it was really good. Bret and John C. Not a bad pairing and one I never thought about. Would like to see more of this.
Debwood-1999 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
OMG! I've become a slash addict thanks to you. Thanks a million! BTW, more one-shots PLEZE!:-D
GrandpasGuitars chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
There's no better way to say hop to it than to threaten someone.

That was cute. I liked it a lot.
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
AH!

oH shit!

You made CENA fuck BRET!

OMG! I've never even...Bret's never even...OMG. You truly are amazing aren't you!

DUDE! That was brilliant!

I enjoyed that! XD!
Jess1186 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
*still laughing at James and the rest of them*

Great! I loved it!
Souless666 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Nice one shot.

Bret and John, huh? I would have perfered anyone but Cena (can't stand him, that is why I love where you killed him in your frist story. ;) LOL)

And damn James must be part killer, part relationship councilor cause he seems to do that in all your stories not directly about him. LMAO

(Oh! On a side note:

Please write a story where Mark kills the pyro guy that tried to fry him on sunday. Not sure if you got to see the vid from the side, but Taker got hit twice with fire before he got away.

Now I am not saying it was on purpose but it looked bad, and if Taker did not have his coat and hat on, he might not have just walked away with just a red spot on his chest.

So please. You are my favorite dark, evil, killing writer person and only you can do what I want to do and make a fic where all involved get their just deserts. I'd write it, but it would take too long and then I could not get to read it and go "WOW THAT WAS GREAT!" So please, I am beggin you to get revenge (in writing) for me and Taker. :D )
JacktheSinister JaketheJust chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
John's so cute when he's being shy! That was amazingly cute and hot all wrapped into one! I'm glad they got each other. I was sitting there like oh no! The cops are gonna have the oddest car check in their careers and it was just the others! lol! I agree, gotta get new friends John, at least so they don't see you sneak off! I loved it!
Esha Napoleon chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I bow down to the great one *bows down*

LOVE IT!
TheMizMagnet chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Haha! I loved this whole thing! Very good job, I loved it.

.: TMM :.