Reviews for Try to Hold Yourself Back
Mr. S chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
Jajajaja buen fic, felicidades!
Anastasia yuki chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
It's one of my favourite fanfiction. You are a very good writer, and the fic is too short.
blackflamesredblood chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
It was great
animeromance1972 chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
UM...MORE PLEASE! ;)
VIXX Dark Angel chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Hahaha I love but next time finish the good stuff
Firediva0 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
This is so good! I love it, and am so thankful that I came across it. Most lemons I came across lately all featured vanilla sex. When I say that I mean the same old same old. Your oneshot was a nice change, and I can't wait to see what you do next!

Your new fan,
Firediva0
rmsfrenchhorn chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Love this so much. I'd love a continuation :P
plue chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
OMG I loved it... You should keep writing more. :3 :) ; )_ΒΆ:
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
need to write when they first met please
Alma Riddle chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This was or is good. I didn't got lost in the story. Hugs /Alma
Eshi9 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This story was great. Even without the smut and humor, it would have been a really interesting tale.

Lawl short review. Loved the story nonetheless.
Dia-chan93 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
How disappointing... Here I was expecting a full blown, naughty sex scene between Harry and Carlise (a pairing that I personally love and wish there was more of) and instead I get a teaser of a naughty sex scene between Harry and Carlise. I feel like you promised cake only to find out that the cake was serious lie.
Safiiri chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
I love it. Really like this pairing and wish I could find more of it :)
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
loved it thanks
snarryislife chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Nice job. I usually hate HP/Twi crossovers (because Edward is usually the guy, and I had a problem with Stepahny Meyer dragging the books out, and all the grammatical mistakes. Honestly, had a sex scene been involved a sex scene and all the happenings being only in book one, and the attempted suicide stuff gone, it would have been an epic Harlequin Fantasy Romance novel, but, I digress) but yours is very well written and the pairing is believable.
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