Great start! Try to add more detail in the texture & movements, just a little tip~! /

LEMON!

MORE!

Ermigersh, this short snippet is 100% fabulous! Would you please add just a bit more?

Please keep going, this is turning out far too fabulous for you to possibly stop now!

I totally loved this page! I will get down on my knees and beg you if that's what it takes for another chapter!

LOL Trudge in real life! Also the photo is hilarious and the story awesome! Lemon won't really change my opinion of your story.

I would love to see a lemon and it was kaiwaii.

It's cute
I think it will be really nice if you continue the story...
(pretty please)

PS: if you continue the story
I would really like to see some CrowXKiryu

November Rain :-)

Oolala

pleeeeeeeaaaaaasssss add the lemon, if i need too, i will use the typed puppy dog eyes...dont make me do that...itwould be soooo cool iof you had Yusei just shouting Jacks name, and no one hearing it...or, you could have Yusei suggest they move somewhere more privet...wat do you think, please add the lemon... ME WANT THE LEMON! pretty please, it would make all of the kingcrabshipping fans who are hungry for lemons really happy

Add the lemon! Come on, you KNOW you want to!

EPIC EPIC EPIC. Get him jack, love how its written and very... spicy _

Please add the lemon! You will make so many kingcrabshipping fans happy if you do.

You really must continue this. It's very interestingindeed and should be on the Kingcrabshipping realm!