hi i loved this story

I love the story, but there are some spots that are hard to follow because the story is out of order. Also, this chapter has a few words missing from the beginning of it and it took me a while to figure out what you were trying to say.

Did you know that you changed Jacks job? In the story where one of the girls thought she was pregnant, you said that Jack was in the army. Now you said he's becoming a doctor. Great story though

Still not sure why its such a biiiiiig deal that she smoked pot ONE time... Its weed, yeah its bad but its not as bad as everyone in the story is making out. If it was coke or dilaudid it would be a different story. Not sure where you're from, but here in NZ weeds not that bad. People smoke that shit everyday.

Awesome story. Great ending. Catch ya on the flip side.

maybe sometime you can work on a lover's touch?

Love it when stories are completed, I don't care how long it takes!
it was great to see how lives turned out over the long run.

very nice story
Thank you

Loved it

I love it. No worries on the shortness of the chap. Sometimes less is more. Great work. Catch ya on teh flip side.

Thanks to keep the story going. I really love it

Wow it's been a long time but I love that you are still working on it till you finish! Will DJ & Jason be next?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! PLEASE KEEP GOING!

Read the whole thing at one go. Boy you hit every event & emotion a family can go through! Good job.

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