The fact that this story will probably never be finished makes me want to crawl in a hole and never come out. I love this version of Jacob and Bella and the humor. I’m so sadddddddd. I need to stop reading incomplete stories. There’s only so much my heart can take.

Cries

Noooooooo I’m so sad whyyyyy did it end like that I’m gonna flip a table

This story has me ugly laughing I can’t. You really know how to paint the picture lmaoooo

*Michael Scott banging steel pan drumsFeelin hot, hot, hot”

I’ve read so many stories that are so angsty and emotional it’s nice to see everyone get along for once lol

Once again reading this story and wishing there was more! It's been 9 years so I won't hold out hope

So this is what could have been if they actually were given the chance to grow up? I do like it though.

No offense taken. Children can be evil, even if they're your own. I hope that this ending help Jake and Bella progress in the right direction.

Seth is definitely like a little brother. Jake imprinted but won't tell Bella that she's the one. Why not?

I neeeeed morrreeeeee

This story is hilarious! I'm so bummed it's not finished. I love that bella has a sense of humor and a personality other than "holy crow" for once!

7 years no updating ?

Depressing when its not been updated for like 7 years! :/ was super getting into it

Ok so these two are beyond fucked up. They have no shame whatsoever. They're creating a shit storm not just for themselves but everyone around them. And they dont seem to care.