I don't think you were descriptive enough for their clothing. Perhaps a link to a picture (esty,hand-drawn or Fredrick of Hollywood are popular choices) and you might want to make Aang more monkish by having him ring a small bell while he walks. Or put jinglely things on his staff.

I think I love you forever. 3

OMG THIS IS THE BEST ZUTARA STORY EVAR!

(Though should it be M? There is touching of private parts. *giggles*)

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