This sounds soo good! It was an awesome start. I can't wait to read what happens next!:) Please update again soon!

The intensity of this one was phenomenal, Fuyu! Excellent.

When's the next chapter? I'm super excited.

Update soon!

I also detest the fact that Minato is dead... I can understand why Kakashi doesn't want to let his teacher go...

I think that perhaps the most poignant line in this piece had to be...'It was suicide, as plain and simple as Sakumo's had been, no matter the reasons behind it for either of them.'

By having this story through Jiraiya's eyes, you allowed us to see two important things...first - you allowed us to see how truly torn apart Kakashi was by the death of Minato...and second - you showed a much deeper side to the Toad Sannin than most people would ever have given him credit for.

Bravo on all accounts...although definitely non-fluffy, it was beautifully executed. Thank you for sharing.

'Krazed

Oh this was so sad, poor beautiful Kakashi as fragile as glass, and part of me doesn't want Kakashi to let go of his love for Minato..this was a YonKaka pairing, no? Fangirls such as I can't get enough of such a pairing and the angst, oh the angst in this fic dominated it so greatly! Ah Kakashi and his angst, I do hope to read more of your work!