| Reviews for Harmonic Maelstrom |
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l.o.l chapter 6 . 7/17/2013 o i forgot, the last part is tsunade & jiraya. |
l.o.l chapter 6 . 7/17/2013 i bet the weapon sakura pick up is most likely yunas staff nivana, and the boy is most likely one of the fayeths, as forthe others no clue. |
King ofheros chapter 4 . 5/8/2013 naruto less mana then sakura? wait mana is spiritual energy meaning mind strength? nvm |
Nessa671 chapter 6 . 6/28/2011 Please update soon. |
Komada chapter 6 . 1/4/2011 I got a feelig that Tsunade and Jiraiya are in the story now, and I also can't wait for he next chapter, please update soon! |
KambiieLuvsFood chapter 6 . 12/27/2010 UPDATEE :] |
BlueFairy10 chapter 6 . 11/3/2010 This chapter was interesting. As for the two characters who were talking at the end I would have to say that they would be Tsunade and Jiraiya and the staff that Sakura found was Yuna's main staff from Final Fantasy X. Well I hope you update soon I can't wait to see what happens. |
xrowa-chanx chapter 6 . 11/2/2010 Yeay an update! Loved the chappie - I liked Sakura's opinions of Cloud, Tidus, Firion and Cecil and Sasuke's dislike of Kefka made me laugh XD I look forward to the next chappie! Oh, and I have no idea what the weapon is nor who the mysterious kid is so... yeah... *pouts* |
Giratina Zero chapter 6 . 10/24/2010 Where's Squall? And when is Cecil going into paladin form? Any way Iwhy is Jenova up and around and do you plan on bringing in Genesis from FFVII Crisis Core? |
mag77 chapter 6 . 10/21/2010 Oh thank you, thank you for updating! You don’t know how happy I was when I saw the update! Yeah, Naruto and Tidus do look a lot alike. And Cloud’s even grumpier than usual. Ultimecia still sounds like Riona from the future; she certainly doesn’t sound as evil, just sad and lonely. I can see how Sakura would be wary of Cecil, what with all his armor; I bet she’d be surprised on how handsome he truly is though. Hm, Cecil and Sasuke are kinda alike with their brothers, but Cecil’s much more kind hearted then Sasuke and more devoted to Golbez-san. Yay, I’m glad I’m not the only one who knows that Sasuke and Cecil share the same English voice actor! Also did you know that Kakashi and Kefka have the same English voice actor too? Freaky... anyway I know I’ve been asking this for the past 5 or 6 chapters, but please have Naruto meet Bartz and Zidane! PLEASE! I do think, and hope, that they’ll get along very well! No, I’ve never played FFX, so I don’t know what staff Sakura has, or the little boy talking to her. :( I also don’t know what Ultimecia taught Sasuke; some kind of lightening attack of course. The only thing I’m pretty damn sure about is that its Jiraya and Tsunade who were sealed. Ero-baka sounds like something Tsunade would call him and she is a ‘hime’ or princess. And Jiraya is pretty self-confident in his abilities and is a seals master. Yeah, feel free to use that for this. It would be pretty cool for Naruto to do that, especially in the FF world. And like always, please update soon! |
xrowa-chanx chapter 5 . 7/20/2010 Yeay an update! I like how you've introduced Firion, Tidus, Cecil and Cloud and I love the ending :D I look forward to reading more! |
mag77 chapter 5 . 7/18/2010 A nice chapter! I’m glad to see that Naruto and Sakura finally met some other Cosmos Warriors. I thought Naruto’s and Sakura’s talk about ramen was cute. Ugh, Cloud always has to ruin all the fun. DX But I still can’t wait for Naruto to meet Bartz and Zidane; I’m sure hilarity will begin! As for the Ultimecia thing, you don’t have to do it. The way you explained her in the last chapter, she seemed more sad then evil like she is in the game. Laziness, can totally understand where you’re coming from. Well, just take your time, but I can’t wait to read the next chapter! |
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 5 . 7/17/2010 Nice chapter, a bit short for my tastes but good nonetheless. I know Cloud is not as uplifting in the game but he wasn't Sasuke bad. ;) I suppose he sees that Naruto suceeded in saving his teammate where he failed with Aeris. An idea, albeit not an original one, you can have Naruto get through Cloud's shell since it seems you had him act like Sasuke and perhaps he cold get some sword wielding tips or materia to augment his low jutsu arsenal. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
BlueFairy10 chapter 5 . 7/16/2010 lol! I really liked that ending! But why does Cloud have to be so damn emo? Well it is in his character I suppose, to always look on the down side of things. Well I hope you update soon! :D Until next time. |
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 4 . 6/22/2010 A very interesting story. You've done a good job of keeping Naruto and Sakura in character. As for Limit Breaks, Naruto's jutsu should be efficient for now, you can use different Rasengan combinations, have him and Sakura come up with new jutsu combinations for each other individually and as a team. Some Kyuubi and Naruto conversations can make this more interesting and i'm a bit surprised Cosmos didn't inquire about his "mixed" chakra. Also Naruto should tell Sakura about his tenant if they hope to be a good team. I hope you continue updating this. |