that was amazing

i thought this was a different take from how other people write trish's pov in her death scene. less "why would henry betray me" and more just her thoughts clearly. i could actually see her thinking all that

i thought that was awesome

you might've missed out on some periods and commas but overall i really like your writing style, i could see the full picture in your descriptions and in just a few words too

good job! :D

omg! that was amazing.

i cried at the end!

you could see his expression though. it was slight remorse...he was killing a bit of himself as well as her.