Sorry, I meant Naratii.

Ooh, I think I know who Hikari is kinda supposed to be!

i think it is pretty good i can't wait for the next chapter

Continue

Hope u edit soon

I hope you don't have deserted this story's writing, it was very interesting! Even if I have an idea about which bond there is between Harry and Narati (and between Naruto, the mysterious Arashi and the sealed man), I want that this story continue, so I'll know if I was right and if the others children will go to Hogward for the second year.

ok i have another question with the pairings and that's with ginny!? even though draco needs to get his butt kick, it would b so cool if ginny n draco get together after draco gets over his pompous attitiude i think this can be a really cool pairing

This story is awesome n the pairing r cute . R Yu going to let hinata continue to at least learn ninja moves n jutus i wud love to see her kick draco butt ninja style

I like really like your story! However, I think you gave your oc too much of a part in this so it takes a lot away from the story. You have some major grammar issues but other than that you did a great job!

i thought hinata would never see naruto and what's-her-name

wow your story is really interesting and sweet too because ooh hina and
harry they are sxo cute togehter all the blushing kawaii, please write
more chapter i would be very happy to read them hina is the
best and the backround story of them all is so sad but
fascinating i assume that harry and naratii are twins
in reallytiy but she doenst inerit the magic of her parents
but who is the father of hinata (bad thought that it is james too)
but i hope not that would be awful for lilly and the upcoming
couple harry and hinata.
please write as fast as you can or upload just give us more
chapters to read

Hi! Just thought I'd correct you,

"since he wanted to immitate his hero the Yondaime (Fourth Hokage)."

The correct way of saying this would be:

"since he wanted to immitate his hero the Yondaime (Fourth) Hokage."

'yondaime' means fourth. This could be Yondaime Hokage (fire shadow), Yondaime Mizukage (mist shadow), or even Yondaime Otokage (I THINK it means 'sound shadow'. It's whatever the hell orochimaru is.).

Sorry if I sound like I'm criticizing you, I'm just a perfectionist with canon details. Again, Sorry.

RAVEN

lol i love this story please update when you get the chance to please.

wow interesting hope u update soon

But they see her again in the next chapter! O.o