Fabulous. Excellent writing and how it makes everyone want to kiss Gibbs just to see if that's exactly what he does taste like... Brilliant!

Hm, as a girl, I must say lipstick tastes terrible. Chalky and what not. ;) but it was an interesting take, you know? I liked it.

Hi Marcia,

the perfect sequel to nici's drabble!

I like the way you described their emotions and sensations.

many greetings

Callista

that is good. i like it so sweet and cute i absolutely love it. D

Lovely. The descriptions of the taste they had never forgotten were just great!

Great job!

You want me to tell you I like your writing again? XD

I loved it! You can tell all you want in as much words as you want and that's great. It's what good writers do. And you described it so well. It lingers!

x

aw this was so cute:) loved it!

Oh my, that was simply beautiful!

Absolutely loved it!

M.

Very good use of the sense of taste in this one with the added twist of the smell of sawdust. Very nicely done.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

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