| Reviews for Make a wish |
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   WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 5/18 A very interesting one-shot here. |
| Yuyue90 chapter 1 . 1/1/2019 Great storyline love it |
| Acc chapter 1 . 10/6/2018 I love it ,love it,love it. Please do write more,your avidly awaiting readers |
| Judaphine chapter 1 . 9/10/2018 I mean no offense when I say this, but you really need to work on how to structure a good story. Your story reads like the ramblings of a child due to lack of punctuation and run on paragraphs. For instance, there should be separate paragraphs for different speakers to indicate that they ARE different speakers. I hope this helps. |
| Lily-Potter8 chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 I really enjoyed your story. I was wondering if you were going to continue it to include how different Harry would be in the story as a wished away with a family. |
| Loveless Demon chapter 1 . 8/8/2017 Ha,in your face Dumble-BORE! |
| AlexiCyn chapter 1 . 7/29/2017 Lovely little fic. Thanks for writing and sharing it. :) |
| moonprincess97524 chapter 1 . 4/30/2016 I love this wonderful wonderful story. As I can see from the date that this is posted you wrote this some time ago I am going to be looking at your profile in hopes of you writing a sequel as that would be so cool. |
| AlyssJocelyn chapter 1 . 11/6/2015 this was good..should like to see more. |
| RandoSnake chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 This is a good story. :) |
| Primus2021 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014 HarryHermione & TobyGabriella(Fluer's sister) Please! |
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 This was finished WAY too quickly. You could definitely get more out of this story. |
| alex forester chapter 1 . 3/27/2014 i really like this story and have read it many times i was wondering if you were going to do another one with harry at school |
| PyruxDeltax chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 Can you make a sequel of Harry's years in Hogwarts along with his brother Toby?! |
| Luli-cat chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 AA! so nice comforting story! :) |
