Sequel, how did he respond if he did at all.

this is very sad but I really liked it. i haven't read much gg fics but i was a literati shipper when the show was on...

Ooh really good.

Holy crap, I love this thing so much. Have I told you how much I adore your writing? So much love for it, you don't even know.

But anyhow, I really did like the ending. Anything happy wouldn't have made sense to me, tbh. It just WORKS this way.

WELL DONE, BBY. 5

Please continue and end with a more positive future for them! The writing was very good, and your style is definitely unique. Please write more!

I think this was very nicely written. It was good to the characters and realistically awkward considering how they had last seen each other. I agree with the plausibility, even the likelihood, that Jess would delete the message. The last time he'd seen her, he felt tender towards her, it was clear, but she had not wanted him perhaps one too many times for him to want to let her try again. Jess wouldn't be the type to trust his heart to someone else in a moment when their feelings are running away with them. We all like the happy endings, but I enjoy a realistic representation, too. Well done.

I REALLY enjoyed this, actually, honey.

I loved how in character all of the characters were and I actually thought the ending was incredibly fitting.

Rory got everything off of her chest in the Rory way, and I think Jess acted the way he would have acted had this happened to him.

He's never really been a caring and sharing kind of guy, and now that he knows, the ball is in his court, but he has to figure out what it is that he's going to do.

I thought it was beautiful, and I can't wait to see more from you, honey!

loved it! soo heartbreaking!

I really loved it! Really well done! Although I too am not too sure about the ending, it was kinda weird... I feel like you could have done something kinda different and better at the end. Overall though... WOW. Really awesome. I'm not sure I like how you painted April though... do you not like her character? ;) Adding the story to my favorites now, this was really nice. :D

Wow this is amazing! Really beautiful, I loved the start of the voice message the babbling so very Rory.

The ending was a little sad.

Thank you for posting. :)

Beautiful. Although I'm not sure how I feel about the ending.