I loved this so so so much! :) :) :) :)

*thinks* don't do it. Don't do it. Don't do it. Don't do it.

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AWWWWWW!

I LOVE THIS STORY! It was the perfect story. OMG not only did Monk save Julie but he gave her... and Natalie his gift. That is so Monk (even though he'd never admit it...lol))

I really liked this story; it was very easy to read, really emotional, the dialogue you wrote sounded just like the characters.

Okay so far this is like THE BEST STORY I have ever read. Don't leave us hanging

Good for Adrian. I'm really proud of him

good story. though i must say that AB- is the rarest blood type with only about 1% of the population having it. O is very common. O- not so much but not the rarest

I love it! What next? More and more lol. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Great story, well written and all.

Cheers!

Excellent cliffover. I have a great way you can open the next chapter

"What is it," Monk said putting his arm around his friend his concern abut germs diminishing, "what's wrong"

((Also I'm thinking when the angel approaches him everyone in the room should be frozen EXCEPT Monk and Natalie... but wait until the end of the chapter to have the angel apprapach. You should end it on another cliffhanger

End: Suddenly the room froze. Monk looked up and saw a figure glowing in white

"Who are you," he asked

"I'm a messanger from the creater," the figure said, "and I'm here to give you a gift but you can't chose right away. You have 45 days in which to consider it. I know you will make the right decision"

I love both chapters. This story has a huge potential but try to write more description. Please update a.s.a.p

OMG, how awful for them. I cannot wait to see what happens next. You must hurry and post the next chapter, please, you can't just leave it like that!

I will be patiently waiting, yeah right, have you posted it yet? lol.

Thanks for sharing,

SpaceCadet