Hey, I'm doing my weekly rounds of checking for reposted stories on Wattpad. This story came up as one, under the notmine tag. You can find it by searching the story name, or rosequeen14 (The person who reposted it).

If you need any help feel free to message me

Yeah, this story is great! I will happily be a beta reader for your work.

Thanks you for not giving up on this story, as I am having a lot of fun reading it.

Ps. Is Balthazar going to be making more of an appearance in this story?

I like that Harmonie is soul bonded with Harry. That is a nice twist. I am a bit confused to why Harmonie and Harry both want revenge on Ron so much. Maybe explain this a bit better, especially in the parts of the story when Harmonie and Ron are together to begin with. I love Balthazar! He is totally one of my favorite characters. Would like to see more of him actually. Keep on writing this! I'd love to see what happens next.

Liked the story it's pretty good hope to read more.

You've probably given up me by now. I'm sorry for the slow response to your PM. Finding time to read fics is even harder than finding time to write them. Anyway, I'm afraid your plot isn't my cup of tea, but that does not mean it is bad by any means. I think you've got some good stuff here.

I also see that you have this story under Reconstruction. If you really are attached to it, go ahead and continue revising. But, if you're not, you might consider cooking up a new plot or a slightly different plot. I've been a fanfic author for about 10 years. My LS pen-name didn't start producing fiction without some experience behind it, and I've gained quite a bit since. (DE is tons better than EoN, for instance). One gets better at writing by writing, and one gets better at plotting by creating new plots. So, I'm saying, if you feel stuck and don't know where to go on this one, go ahead and move on. If you don't move on, then I wish you the best. I think you could continue to make something of this.

I would suggest that you lengthen the chapters

I love it! Thank you for sharing this very engaging story. I cannot wait to see what more you have planned. _

This is very good so far, looking foreward to more, hopefully you will have an update soon.

please update soon! it's really well written!

update!

Great story, the original parts really shines out. The story seems a bit bland and rushed partially due to lack of description, but also to lack of random information. Making a slight mention of different happenings could help you a great deal, lulling the readers into a sense of belonging in the written world. I would ask to be a beta, but sadly I will probably be very busy during the school year, but I would be glad to temporairly fill in, should you lack offers.

Uodate soon!

Silver

Amazing story! Please update soon!

Whoa, intense!

Oh, so Lily's a Pureblood? Then that would proabably mean that Petunia would be a squib since she was Lily's sister...

Anyways great chapter I loved the moment at the end. :)