A good interesting variation on the story, well written

Aww, I totally loved this! You wrote all the angst and drama beautifully! It was a work of art :D however, there was a lot of duplicate parts and the ending was a bit too abrupt in my opinion... still, it was amazingly spectacular :D :D

Love it so far but hey, you should go back and proof-read your story, you repeated several sentences D:

That was amazing. I loved it. It was so cute. I loved the flashbacks especially. It was great!

I'm glad that Vala was able to be honest of her feeling and emotions toward her past life on the Odyssey. Certainly now that Daniel knows what Vala has been going thru, her crying was just natural, and I'm glad that she relied on him to take that emotional load off her shoulder. I love the fact that Daniel finally realized his life is nothing without Vala, and that they can both carry each other for the rest of their journey. :D

I really enjoyed that story and am eagerly waiting for the sequel. :)

Thanks for the final chapter. It's good to see V and D coming to a place of contentment with one another. I'm looking forward to your sequel.

Hey DeborahSloane, Let's hope Daniel finally comes to his senses and tells Vala. And it would serve Daniel right if Vala told him what the "visions","memories", whatever you want to call them showed her. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks, LnS.

I knew you wouldn't kill Vala [if only out of fear of all the rabid D/V shippers who would track you down]

It might be nice if Jack can explain to Vala that Daniel was in love with her before his 'fainting spell'. Just in case she isn't sure that Daniel is telling her the truth.

Oh Happy days. I was so waiting for this chapter. I love how Jack and the rest tease Daniel about his fainting, but I'm glad he finally sought wisdom from Tealc. If anyone knows Vala's pain, it would be him seeing Vala in such distress over Daniel. Now Daniel can completly understand what Vala was going thru, since his own memories aboard the Odyssey have returned. I'm surprised that Daniel didn't write a letter to himself though, but glad Tealc explained Vala had. Now that Vala is awake, Daniel couldn't help explain or apologize to Vala for his insensitive motives towards her. I knew once he knew the truth, his love for Vala would unify them both for a reconcilliation of sorts. I think Vala can began to heal the depth of hurt that followed in her dreams and Daniel can appreciate who Vala is in this time period. Do I hear wedding bells? hehehe :D

What an interesting idea! I was sure the memories were somehow going to make her sicker and sicker (like hallucinations?) but I did *not* expect him to remember. Thanks for writing!

Well, as much as I hated you at the end of chapter 12, I love you at the end of this one

Glad to see there will be a sequel

I was so happy in chapter 12 to see Jack was back

Oh and something that made me laugh in chapter 12 :

"Perfect for each other? You don't want to wonder if you missed out on each other, Daniel" "That's advice we could all follow." I was like 'Yeah, that's a sure thing' lol

also, liked that one : "For someone who doesn't love her, you sure like to talk about loving her." That he does ! lol

I couldn't manage to review chapter 12 so... I make review of both chapters here

Will Jack be back again ?

That was so sweet! (Thanks for letting Vala be okay.)

I hope he let's go of her hand before Dr Lam shocks her again...ouch :)

Can't wait to hear more. Thanks for sharing.

You have made my day. I was so hoping for another chapter today, and here you are. But I digress, the fact that the team went out to save her, and needling Daniel about his feeling about Vala. His real concern for Vala after a distaster and how he realizes Vala signed a DNR form. I had to think hard on what that meant. Do Not Resesitate. Gosh, poor Vala must of really thought hard on just letting her life ebb away to feel that she should live. But Daniels determination and almost slip of the tongue that he needed her, was enough I think to realize how much he really loves Vala. :D