This was just disturbing. I truly wished there was an OOC warning in the description.
After reading what you were trying to portray
The wording was horribly done. I just do not enjoy glorifying rape, she was literally pushed to the point in which she basically went along with it.

Hola entiendo pero preferiria q bella estuviera enamorada y carlisles también q fueran compañeros saludos

Excellent story if only one chapter. I would have liked it to continue with her and Edward, but very enjoyable all the same.

Lol as much as this may bother other people, I liked it.
Wish there was another chapter!

I Love is story very much and keep go on please

Gross

All I can say is that "It is a STORY!" . Make believe, not true, fantasy! I liked it! It showed Daddy C in a new light. I don't know why people take stories personally, this place is to write and create. If they didn't like the beginning they did not have to read the rest. Fiction is Fiction with a essence of reality. I say Bravo to your writing skills.

Sorry, but I liked it.

I loved this story! I really wish you’d continue writing more! Don’t let people bring you down, I agree that this can be perceived in a variety of ways, but ultimately it’s fiction and really damn good fiction. I know this is years later, but I would still love an update ;)

cringe...
also, this is either borderline rape or non-con.

She was raped. Period. Stop trying to find excuses. He forced himself until she let him do what he wanted. It was not like she could have stopped him.
Admit it, you just glorified rape.

This would have been perfect for me if there wasn't the constant mention of Edward. Such a turn off. He's so ugly and gross I can't

Wow Loved it! Thank you for sharing.

I really enjoyed this story and will be saving it to my phone wall so I can enjoy it again! It's a new more dominate take on Charisle I liked!

Thanks for your comments regarding the feedback you received. I enjoyed the story and it's important for people to remember that it is about enjoying the story simply for fun. Personally I thought it was highly erotic and intense which I loved. I can understand how people will each perceive it differently - seduction, dubious consent, coercion, etc. I don't see this as a rape story but as an older experienced man seducing a young hormonal woman who is frustrated with her lack of intimacy with Edward. But yes, I can see how it can offend some people as being perceived as rape - he's older, stronger and was using coercion. But again, it's open to different interpretation and I read it as fun, kinky, nasty erotica. Carlisle really was something else!