Hello there!
Your story is wonderful, just amazing!
I reread it more than once and I regret only that I did not find it before. I thought about this for a long time and finally decided to ask you for permission to translate your text.
A link to the publication - if necessary - of course I promise to bring.
Waiting for to your reply, your reader.

Hello, dear author!
Your story is wonderful, just amazing!
I reread it more than once and I regret only that I did not find it before. I thought about this for a long time and finally decided to ask you for permission to translate your text.
A link to the publication - if necessary - of course I promise to bring.
Waiting for to your reply, your reader.

I really love this story! 3

Ah, so cute and so hot!

Oh my! This was both the cutest and the most capturing story! The count helping his weird virgin son with his fab vampire skills and all haha, what a good dad! I feel like he's been previously worried since Herbert isn't all that young anymore... and then Herbert and Alfred together... how did three chapters manage to show so much honest progress in their relationship even though barely any time passes? Very well written I absolutely loved reading it and found it to be very enchanting. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece and your view of the two (three?).

That was absolutely hilarious and adorable at the same time.

Teheheheh
This is all too sweet. I'm -giggling-.
This is too good
Ahhhh I love this

This is the best TdV ff I've ever read :D been 2 years since you wrote that, but an additional chapter would be awesome. Just saying ;)

So cute!

I love the idea of the whole thing. And the part where Herbert and Alfred have sex...god, I'm a prev.

When I was reading the second chapter it took me a few minutes to realize Alfred HAD tried to kill them. I was like, "What is he talking about? When did he try to...oh, god, I'm slow." To be truthful I can't speak anything other than English and I only know of a things like that by watching a filmed verison of it on youtube and reading the plot on wikipedia...

I sure wouldn't have minded if the count had stayed xD

Was really hot like this too though! ;)

wonderful... :)

Mmm, I agree. Alfred sandwich is VERY tasty and VERY filling :D

Simply spectacular! Is there any chance I could entice you to write something else for the pairing, hm? Pretty please with a cherry on top?

I love this story, but I do think there's more to it without an argument or an unhappy ending. All the fanfics that ship Herbert/Alfred either end with a sweet, simple way of them declaring love, (even if it is one-sided,) or are almost strictly explicit encounters. I would love to see a fanfic like this continue on to a declaration of love between the two of them, so please keep writing.

its a gorgeous story, i wish you would write more...

i just love the way the count is helping the two of them with their "misunderstanding" ;)

i was a little worried when i read the second chapter (poor crying herbert...), but it was unnecessary, the third chapter certainly compensates him for everything :)