Reviews for An Armored Whole
Chad bunger chapter 1 . 4/15/2019
If you can't tell I liked this series a whole lot.
BaconXLord53 chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
This was definitely in my top 5 favorite stories easily.
Bjorn Mektig chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
Awesome series, it's disappointing to see it's end, but one can imagine how the epilogue would go. Thanks for writing this. Au revoir.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
Absolutely brilliant, all three stories are awesome
THANK YOU chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Awesome story hope u dont give up on fanfics
Looking forward to whatever else you post
The 9 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
We have enjoyed this series, and is almost a shame to see it end.
We shall keep you in mind.
And, more importantly, we shall finally reveal ourselves.
Grey Frost of Fire (Body)
Spotted Leaves of Stone (Speed)
Bleu Starres of Thunder (Skill)
Snow's Drop of Ice (Compassion)
Garnet Pawed of Darkness (Corruption)
Tiger's Claw of Star (Ambitions)
Yellow Fangs of Tree (Knowledge)
Fiery Heart of Mountain (Strength)
Jay's Wing of River (Purity)
Spartan552 chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Story book ending good story good ending
GuntherRiechwald chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Well done sir, this is an outstanding piece of literature, I constantly wish this was actual Halo Lore. Oh well, and I feel terribly lonely because I read this on Valentines Day, and Samus and Chief's relationship made me feel fuzzy on the inside.

I might at some point try and illustrate some of the scenes from this story, but that might not be for a while, and I'll only show them when they are absolutely perfect (by my standards, and that means actual artist level of detail) so long and thanks for all the feels!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This is the best Master Chief and Samus story I have ever read. There where a few errors though. You spelled Mendez wrong. I probably did too. The sad thing is I have the books to look it up.
Thinkykaleidoscope chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
From the first sentence of Samus being nauseated I knew she was pregnant! I really enjoyed how you kept the reader guessing. That always keeps us interested. Personally, I prefer this one over the others. My favorite part was when John flipped off the admiral. Classic.
twitterbook chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
you did good my man you did good. this is by far the greatest fanfiction I had ever read you deserve I award am sad that the story ended but I have to say great job
Dragonov chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*takes a breath*OOOOOOOO
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Probably the best halo metro is fix I've ever read
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Holy shit another one! Woo hoo! You write amazing stories
Punchlinechar chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
You should make a new series with the same crossover, but make it play out differently. I loved this, it was so well written.
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