I usually am not much of a fan of such short stories - they tend to leave you, you know, unsatisfied.
But this one?
Hands down, it's awesome. Great work!

Aw that was cute

I loved this story! It's so touching.

Aww, that's sweet. I always liked Miranda more than Tali or, Devil forbid, Jack.

She reminds me a lot of Morrigan from Dragon Age, a cold bitch on the surface, but in reality is very vulnerable at her core. What makes Miranda better than Morrigan however, is that Miranda doesn't bail on you when everything is over.

aww this was so cute! will you continue? plz? would love to know what happens next!

Great story, I love The Shepard/Miranda pairing

Well done. Have not seen nearly enough of these two on site lately. Press on, by all means.

Great work on this. Nice one dude. Keep at it.