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Love it!

Great story and chapter! :)

Hi (:

First things first, happy birthday! ~

It's weird, the last few days, I've been re-reading your story, I just had a feeling, that I should; funny right?

So I have a lot of thoughts, a lot of them, that I'm sure I won't be able to tell you in only a review. I know that may sound dramatic, but your story has become, as funny as this sounds, a part of my life as a reader. And as a reader, I am always so impressed by your talent.

You write these characters in such a beautiful way; you don't over exaggerate or over romanticize, which makes sense, given their circumstances up until now. I admire the way you always seem to be able say so much, in so few words, I struggle with that, I often forget that less, can indeed sometimes be more. truly lovely!

I feel like I should have more to say about the chapters themselves, however, I keep coming back to how much your story has affected my life, which I know, this isn't about me, it's about your creation. But I do feel the need to address this.

I was in my last year of middle school (I think) when you first published this, judging by the date on here. And now I am a Jr. (3rd year) in college. That's insane! And I just thought I should mention that, it's been a long time!

I just have to say, that I've loved all of your chapters, thus far, but especially the last two and this newest one. It's weird, to think of Ai as anyone, but the Hell Girl and by extension Ren, as anyone other then her servant. It's strange to to think that they are free now, a complete lack of danger; for the time being.

The majority of stories surrounding them are all set in the regular HG universe, excluding the AU's and all that, so for me, after reading this chapter over, it feels like a big weight has lifted from my chest, for them. But also new ones added; with all that freedom, and mortality, what will they do? How will they survive? And most interestingly, for me, with the now, actual age difference and maturity levels, between them, how will that all impact their relationship?

Also, can you look into Ai getting some therapy? XD Just something I was considering while reading the chap, she's now free, with hundreds of thousands of years of Hell Correspondence, bull that could maybe, be very traumatic (to say the least) to deal with.

I thought it was fascinating, how you addressed right away, the problems they will most likely be facing. Again, the sexuality stuff from Ren, really stood out for me, and how Ai, you know, is the complete opposite of that. Very interesting! To me at least.

Okay, this is getting way to long and rambling, it's like 2:40 here in Boston and I'm sure I've already annoyed my next door-dorm mates enough. I am not exaggerating when I say that I honestly. scratched and nearly threw my laptop across the room, when I saw that you updated.

Oh well, I could care less!

Thank you so much, for your talent and time given to your story. It's become a real source of inspiration for me, since I now have my own drabble set for these too, currently in progress on here, which was only started because of your set, thank you for that, truly.

Also, don't think I didn't see the "TBC" now that you wrote it, I better see an update, at least before I'm 30, so that gives you about 10 years. XD!

Thank you again!

Hugs and love!

Your faithful reader,

Mia ~

Very well written.

Cool man update soon!

Make more!

Aaaaaaw nice ! Hope u will update the next chapter soon !

no updates...

This is not the reality I wanted. *sniff*

Still, I love how you weaved their tale with drabbles. I love almost every single one of them. Especially the rare parts where Ren and Ai intersect.

Nice! I love the way Ren is portrayed in this drabble, and I look forward to more!

Huhhh.. Ur not going to update, r u? But i'll follow in case

Ah. I love this story. Very well written with so much meaning to it. Ai and Ren... Such an odd pairing, but a good one, nonetheless.

I hope you choose to update soon because that would be great. :)

~A Broken Heroine

What a great story! I love the drabbles and how they led to a bigger story. You write really well and all the characters were very in character! Its nice to see a deeper perspective into Enma Ai's mind, even if it wasn't a lot. You also hit a really good chord with Ren's feelings too, I love the expansion of character you gave him.

Really nicely done and I can't wait for more! Please update again!

wow this fic is very well written. :)

the progression is slow but it definitely makes readers want to read more.. Talk about cliffhangers! Your good! XD two thumbs up for you man! (make it 4 including my 2 toes hehe) :3

i really hope you can update soon! Rock oN!

I have no words for what i just read you are brilliant

YOU BETTER CONTINUE SOON OR I WILL BE SO SAD [:

and one more thing Thank You continue soon

Bye for now [: