Thanks for the share, a good short story.

*clapclapclap* That was great! Loved it

i was so confused for a second when Kaizer and Harry were talking together hahaha

very cool

AMAZING!

I loved this story

1st chap: love it!

This is a decent story. So far as I see, your grammar and spelling are good, your sorry line is good and it seems to keep a good pace. And yet I still feel it's bland. Not great but not bad. Maybe it just needs more detail. There is something missing for me.

I liked it, I just wish it would ha e been longer and more detailed. With more focus on Hermione as queen also. I really like that you made Ron useful and competent. I find it odd that Harry is suddenly so good at fighting. Now I can only imagine the reign of queen Purdita.

This was a really good story!
You did an excellent job with the storyline and it was fun to read!

Boring femempower crap

Thanks for a much more helpful Dumbledore than most. The amount of 'Dumbledore bashing' going on in fanfiction is rather annoying.

I did enjoy very much! Thank you for sharing. I'm glad the trio stayed a trio, usually that doesn't happen in these kinds and it's a nice change of pace.

I rarely comment on people's works, but I feel that I must with this exemplary piece of art. You truly seem to be a talented writer and if you were to ever persue a career in it, I believe I would support you. I look forward to any other works you deem to write.

Sincerely
The Grey Finch

Amazing