I like it, I don't normally read Femslash (I don't like it, too sappy) but this was great!

:( ... this was sour -.-!... but Hermione, sweety, you know you're not happy; when you choose to realize that, I hope Pansy is still around.

oh! and this was lovely nonetheless... I think you have done more that pwp because there is a background and a chemistry between the characters that makes it believable :)

Hope you keep writing!

Loved the lemon and forbidden love, sad that hse had to turn Pansy away :( I really liked your lemon though!

As much as I don't approove of adultry, the ending was just plain sad. I hope you write more like these. I read the other one that takes place in Pansy's office. I REALLY like them! They send off a 50s or 60s vibe, at least thats how I see it in my head. I love that time period!(especially in film)

Wonderful, I love your writing. The Arabesque was brilliant :)

Good show. I loved it and how you were able to have me feel sympathy for a normally completely unlikeable character. :)

I don't read that much Hermione/Pansy but this is really good. I ecpecially liked the ending. Impressing. Well done :)

I wish you did more femslash, you write it so beautifully. Nice job on the angst and still keeping Pansy haughty as ever.

Awesome and thanks for writing.

very beautifully done :D:D

Hot!Too bad for Pansy.

I don't tend to make a habit of reading femmeslash, but I'm glad I read this one! It was an interesting pairing (never read one about them before) and I liked the way you wrote it. The end was achingly sad :( I feel sorry for them!

- purplerawr